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BTNscope

Submitted by AlienArsonist
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
A Scope icon. Since my aimer was rejected i decided to approach this icon in a different way. Now that i have some experience i thought this would be some what good im open to suggestions.

Please Critique Brutally.

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Ok so i remade it all i like the new look so much better. Im actually really glad i changed it because compared to the old icon this one is 100% better.

credit blah blah blah enjoy!

Keywords:
scope, war, sniper, head, shot, Alien, Arsonist
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BTNscope (Icon)

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24th Feb 2010 Pyramidhe@d: Looks better than the original version. Well done.
  1. 24th Feb 2010
    Pyramidhe@d: Looks better than the original version. Well done.
     
  2. The Panda

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    Inside the scope looks weird, Change the blue.
     
  3. AlienArsonist

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    Change the blue to what? The gun isn't aiming at anything and any other color would seem unusual to me. I'm not trying to be a dick or anything i just don't know what i can do inside the scope. The lens has been a problem since my original idea. If you could help me out and spit ball some ideas to me i would be really grateful.
     
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    I know, i was just pointing that out, and i would maybe re-size it bigger just a little because all the details from the gun gets killed in 64*64
     
  5. AlienArsonist

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    I cant really do any bigger I am messing around with the sizes and this is what i have so far
    I cant get it bigger without cutting too much out
    [​IMG][​IMG][​IMG]
     
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    I see, then forget what i said.
     
  7. Deolrin

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    Change the background color, it clashes with the scope 'visor'.
     
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    This is just what i suspect:
    I think this icon is acually a picture from google or somewhere.
    Where he changed colors and took away the gun beneath that we still can see some about.
    It looks alot like that........
    Well... maybe i'm wrong?
    If you've made this anyway... it's still an OKAY icon.
     
    Last edited: Feb 13, 2010
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    [​IMG]

    Rotate left-to-right, use some smudge, fill background with radial gradient. Voilà.
     
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    As it seems like its a google image cropped out, it still looks nice.
     
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    That's probably not all there is to it... He probably just used the outlines. But I can't deny the icon is based of this image.
     
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    It wasn't that easy i didn't just smudge everything I used the image for shape... anyways i redid the gun so i guess its fine now?
     
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    How could i know it so bad ;o !
    I think it's not fair "mirroring" or anything like that without naming it in the text when you are getting great critique of people that thinks you've done it from 0%.
    Seriously. . . . -.-
    I mean people gave you rep for this icon cause they belived you've done this from ground, I just dont think you deserve it at all...
    "Yay rotating.... removing some stuff.... making it smaller.... changing some colours...."
     
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    Listen if i had this gun and i would just take a picture of it modify it and post it as an icon... But i don't so i grabbed a scope i changed the gun and made this... I also didn't receive rep for this icon i don't under stand why you making all these remarks. Instead of telling me that it is BASED on an image from google which i know... tell me how i could change, improve, modify it...
     
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    you could just redraw the scope, now that you had practiced by tracing the shape of it.
     
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    The green looks weird but that's just me.
     
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    Nice one :eek: I think the scope just have alittle 5 Degrees angle wrong though :p
    But it's great now...
    If you want a tip this is one :p
    I think you should also lay out a icon with the scope not attatched to anything... just scope nothing else...
    Cause then people can use this one to "Turn On Scope" if you get what i mean...
    I take back my charges against you, great scope Now.
     
  18. AlienArsonist

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    I can always change the color. The way i make my icons is i have multiple layers and all the shading is done on its own layer a color change would take me 3 seconds. So if you want me i can change it to black or something or add pattern camouflage on it or maybe digital camo.
     
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    The hand-drawn non-traced scope looks better, in my opinion. And I think that you should go with the camo idea.