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BTNPunch

Submitted by Destructor [DoR]
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
A Peon who gets punched in the face and lose one of his teeth.

Keywords:
Punch, Orc, Peon, Human
Contents

BTNPunch (Icon)

Reviews
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16:16, 15th Sep 2009 zombie2279: The proportions of the hand are messed up and the style is too funky for my taste, other than that, it's good.
  1. 16:16, 15th Sep 2009
    zombie2279: The proportions of the hand are messed up and the style is too funky for my taste, other than that, it's good.
     
  2. Destructor [DoR]

    Destructor [DoR]

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    This is my first icon with a full detailed face, so I need some comments how to improve. it.

    It´s still wip.
     
  3. TheHunterKiller

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    Awesome. I see nothing bad at it.
     
  4. Jacky The turtle

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    maybe some bloody nose of punch ??
     
  5. FrIkY

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    Looks great, but when I first saw it, I thought that the hand is picking peon's nose! xD
     
  6. Destructor [DoR]

    Destructor [DoR]

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    Any idea how to fix it ?^^ A Bigger nose?

    The bloody nose is a good idea.
     
  7. M4stah

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    I thinks its an awkward way to punch someone, the knuckles must be the highest on your hand, and hitting the peon. Otherwise good icon.
     
  8. Squidle

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    Nice one.
    Maybe make the hand like it's moving.
    With smudge or somethin'... I dunno

    But the peon looks quite good, maybe some more shading on his head.
     
  9. Piwlady

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    This is absolutely pure awesomeness
     
  10. enjoy

    enjoy

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    A fist turns the other way, with the back of the hand up...
    And maybe alittle to cartoonish, and needs more shading.
    otherswise good.
     
  11. NFWar

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    I see not bad, I see strange. Fist is kinda... rotated wrong?
    It looks like someone punch him not from side like people allways do :p
    but from down. I dont say what it is bad, did that is right at that way?
    Overlook fist ane more time.
     
  12. Squidle

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    That's called an "uppercut".
    And I see somethin' bad... your grammar.
     
  13. NFWar

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    Hehe... you ziped me. I am not good at English
     
  14. Iyzz_Fryzz

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    funny icon :gg:
     
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    seems good, but some changes are needed! it would be great if you gave it some perspective and made him face the way the punches go like this:http://www.flyfishingfrenzy.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/03/istock_face-punch.jpg this is just some random picture from google, and make it that the peon really "feels" the punch cuz it gotta hurt right? it also looks like the hand is just standing still there like its a threat of some sort, make it so the peon is unprepared and make it look like the hand is moving to punch the peon! but otherwise good icon 4/5!

    when fixed i will give +rep 5/5
     
  16. The Panda

    The Panda

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    Nice idea, but the fist doesn't look like its hitting the peon.
     
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    It looks like the fist is in front of the orcs face, instead of punching the bastard :O
     
  18. f0rsAk3n

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    hahahhahahahaha Classic! :D
     
  19. Kuhneghetz

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    Looks more like the guy is knocking on the Peon's face rather than punching.