BTNPotion

[Moderator]

10:19, 17th Dec 2009
Pyramidhe@d: More definition please.

enjoy: Much much more definition required.

 

[Misha]

this looks like a peace of colored jello-candy, not a vial or.. whatever this is.

learn to draw straight lines.

 

[Midnighters]

Little harsh there don't you think Misha?

 

[Licheus]

I agree. Sure the icon needs much more work to reach an acceptable, approvable standard, but we should focus on telling him how to improve it rather than making him feel bad.

So, aki, it's unclear and way too blurry. Try to improve your art by maybe looking at other potions. Add shading and details. Here's some really good examples:

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/packs-542/three-tier-alchemy-potions-116902/

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/packs-542/colourbottle-152803/

Good luck. =)

 

[Midnighters]

Good informations Licheus, I agree with everything he said, and one other thing, do not put the glow so hard on the outside.

 

[aki15]

Ok, thank you guys i'll try to make it better ;D !

 

[Misha]

there is nothing wrong in telling the guy to steady his hand a bit more so he can draw more awesome stuff. :3

 

[Panda]

Define the glass of the bottom a little more, right now it doesn't look like glass.