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zombie2279: Further zoom in on the bird and then detail it. It's hardly visible otherwise. Once done, increase the quality of the effect around it aswell, it's rather plain and lacks sufficient color variations and highlights.
Rejected until updated.
8:22, 4th Aug 2009
zombie2279: Definitely enough changes made, the bird's shape looks good now. It's quite a shameful fact that the whole point of this icon (Bird of energy) is now lost. It's a bit too crowded and the details of the face are a bit missing, but I guess it's useful. 3,5.