BTNLightningStorm

[Moderator]

13:17, 23rd Jul 2010
[email protected]: Commented. Also dont do just simple duplicates for the lightnings.

27th Jul 2010
[email protected]: Useful

 

[The Panda]

In-game.

Ill fix the clouds soon.

 

[crimson fire]

looks good, to me looks sort of cartoony though ^^

 

[The Panda]

Yeah, ill re-make some stuff on this.

 

[[email protected]]

can you show something other than 2 lightnings to show it is a storm?

 

[The Panda]

P.S updated.

 

[GearsofBlood]

Looks even better now, all you need now is probly rain. Other then that its fine how it is.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

[To fix] = First, using the same lightning and CNP it everywhere isn't really creative and it reduces the quality of the icon a lot. Now, I highly suggest you to redraw a few lightning and to give them a few different shapes. Second, since it's a thunger storm, and there's lightning, I suggest you to make the clouds much darker and to add lightning reflection on them. (Since the light source is the lightnings, it should be blue) And for last... now if you choose to make your clouds darker, than you should make the sky brighter, I suggest you a desaturated dark blue.. abit like this color.

good luck

 

[The Panda]

[To fix] = First, using the same lightning and CNP it everywhere isn't really creative and it reduces the quality of the icon a lot. Now, I highly suggest you to redraw a few lightning and to give them a few different shapes. Second, since it's a thunger storm, and there's lightning, I suggest you to make the clouds much darker and to add lightning reflection on them. (Since the light source is the lightnings, it should be blue) And for last... now if you choose to make your clouds darker, than you should make the sky brighter, I suggest you a desaturated dark blue.. abit like this color.

good luck

You dont have to be mean goblin, ill fix these whenever..

 

[Mr.Goblin]

where was I mean in that? I've invest my time to help you out and make a constructive comment! D:

 

[The Panda]

I no, i was just kiddin

 

[mnib]

now it looks awesome to me

 

[darkdeathknight]

Looks blurry. Sharpen everything up.

 

[The Panda]

Updating soon.