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08:06, 14th Oct 2009
Zombie.: [Trolling removed from description] First of all, the boring color scheme of the background make all the lighting effects in the foreground pretty much blend in. I'd advise you to go over either of them with a soft yellow or blue, or preferably make the lighting yellow and the bg blue. Right now, the ground and the clouds look pretty much the same, do some details that make the ground look something different than clouds. Also, the shape of the lightning effects could use improvements, observe pictures made of the similar events to determine how they look like.
Rejected until updated.
Zombie.: [Trolling removed from description] First of all, the boring color scheme of the background make all the lighting effects in the foreground pretty much blend in. I'd advise you to go over either of them with a soft yellow or blue, or preferably make the lighting yellow and the bg blue. Right now, the ground and the clouds look pretty much the same, do some details that make the ground look something different than clouds. Also, the shape of the lightning effects could use improvements, observe pictures made of the similar events to determine how they look like.
Rejected until updated.