BTNFortitude

[Moderator]

5 Sept 2011
Pyramidhe@d:Looks good

 

[Ketsuno Anson]

The shading on the abs look weird,on the arm too and what is that yellowish thing behind him,don't look like an aura to me

 

[Ecrolls]

Is he made of armour or something? It should look more clunkier than that.. and the shading just has a flat look about it.

 

[InfernalTater]

You need to work on the shading, man! Looks interesting, but too flat.

 

[graystuff111]

wow, this thing totally looks different compared to what colors it is around. I never thought it would be this severe. I'll rework the colors until it looks better. Give me a couple of days though.
Edit: To prove my point, look at THIS

 

[Ketsuno Anson]

Not much of a difference...

 

[I3lackDeath]

I would make its aura much brighter and smooth out the edges. Belly part of his armor looks.... interesting?

 

[InfernalTater]

I actually didn't notice that...
Yeah, the body part needs fixing. There should be 3-4 layers to the armor in this area, but I counted around 8. Such thin lines makes it look like you're either seeing an extended rib cage or a dozen jelly rolls. Abs would be 3-4 pairs (6-8 abs), and not so thin.

 

[InfernalTater]

Dude, you can't just put a bunch of lines across his stomach, sloppily covering up your previous mistake.
Now the shading on his stomach doesn't match the rest of it. Smoothen out the shading on the stomach, and then add a couple of lines for abs. If his armor has the shape of chest muscles, then I would expect to also see the shape of abs in the armor, otherwise it simply looks like it's shaping breasts, not muscles.