BTNFemaleHE

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00:04, 30th Jun 2012
I3lackDeath: No changes made since my last comment, it could still need highlights in the hair as finishing touches. Anywho, your effort pays off (just don't sit on faces for too long, please ).

 

[I3lackDeath]

Hmmm, so you're crazy about faces now, hm?

Aaaanywho, try to make the eyebrows look more feminine and use some more highlights on the hair.

 

[Chaosy]

something about the eye and eyebrows looks wrong, but its a 4/5 anyways! gj and rep+

edit, cant give you rep+ yet

 

[Sin'dorei300]

@I3lackDeath
She's elf! Elves have eyebrows like that!

 

[I3lackDeath]

@I3lackDeath
She's elf! Elves have eyebrows like that!

Don't assume that I don't know that...

Still, yours are way too stiff here, the way they're meeting the nose, it just doesn't look right...
What I mean is:
It looks as if the brows, together with the nose, are a separate layer on top of the face, like a mask with two pieces: top and bottom.

Errr, it's hard to say...

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Here's a big pic. What can i do?

 

[I3lackDeath]

Here's a big pic. What can i do?

Very kind of you to upload the big picture for me. Thanks.

I've posted two files in a Pastebin link.
The first file is the Photoshop one, in the additional layer, you will see what I'd change:

• The ear didn't fit to the pose you chose for the head. Always think abuot how things are connected to each other. Since it's a sideview, draw the ear accordingly. It doesn't go all the way up you drew it here.
• Also, you can make the eyebrows stay out and be visible as separate things from the face with wisely chosen outlining (I chose one of the darkest skin colours you used to do that).

The second image shows a preview of the icon without borders, once you've added some highlights to the hair and eyebrows.

Your big images look great, but you pay too much attention to details in that large resolution.
You have to think about what will be visible in the Icon. Too many details you create are lost due to that small size of an icon.
That's the most important thing in Icon creating: Creating an image that features everything you envision without going nuts on details that will (unfortunately) be lost.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Thx very much, man! I'll update it when i'll have time!

 

[RandomPogi]

Hmmm, so you're crazy about faces now, hm?

Aaaanywho, try to make the eyebrows look more feminine and use some more highlights on the hair.

Crazy about Female Faces, that is! And He's doing Great!!

EDIT: But this one still needs improvement, she needs a bit more feministic features. ^~^ God Bless~!

 

[GhostThruster]

She...doesn't have a brow ridge.

 

[Panda]

Yes, her eyebrows are pretty much the color of her skin, so it looks like the skin stretch up in a weird way. I would change the color of her eyebrows to maybe brown? or some other color.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Updated!

 

[I3lackDeath]

Please update your icon again, the preview bug has been fixed.

 

[Cakedog345]

Beautiful !!!

 

[Kgg123]

I like it
5/5 =)

 

[BiroN]

Cute. Love it <3