BTNDagger

[Moderator]

11:12, 16th Jul 2009
zombie2279: The top part of the curve looks misshaped, make the part close to the hilt a bit more linear. Scale down the weird black tone in the middle and replace it with some soft shading. You might also want to add a small black tone to the part when the blade and the hilt meets.

17:58, 17th Jul 2009
zombie2279: Sufficient amount of changes made. Resource approved.

 

[krisserz]

*Off-Topic*You said:

Meh,... I'm not doing anything.. ^^

You hurt my feelings by uploading this ;P

Btw looks good, but kinda too basic.

 

[dansaDisco]

Much better than your other icons.
Yet its a bit blurry, isn't it?
The small details (like the dots) cant be seen properly because they are.. Too small, making it look quite awkward

 

[Godslayer]

well high rezz doesnt look so uber, but thats not counting anyways.
icon looks ok, but i would have chosen a diffrent glow, in the end i´d say nothing too special 3/5

 

[-Berz-]

Yeah, it's hard to do any of the details on this small icons :< (for me)

Dman, I forgot to sharpen it up Damn! D:

 

[krisserz]

The glow is ok, but I don`t like this color at all.

 

[-Berz-]

I thought grey and blue stacks together.

 

[Panda]

Review,
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1:Looks a bit blurry from backround you might wanna clear all that up a bit.
2:The shading needs some work on the blade part, the black line doesn't look good.
3:Chould add a little bit more decoration around the sword.
4:You chould make lines going down to the tip of the sword to make it look like its moving or cutting through a body part, but thats if you want.
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(All my recommendations to your icon, you can choose to use these or not, your choice.)
Thanks, Army-of-pandas.
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[krisserz]

Maybe gray and red?

 

[-Berz-]

Army-of-Pandas, I'll use some of your ideas

Krisserz, Red would "fell" out to much.

 

[dansaDisco]

I like the colors of your glow, but I'd prefer the green a bit more blended with the blue.

 

[krisserz]

Hmm, I don`t think, that this green something is a good idea.

 

[dansaDisco]

Hmm, I don`t think, that this green something is a good idea.

Why not?
Only blue would make it to monotone IMO.

 

[-Berz-]

Ok a list to do:

-make better shading/highlights
-Make the glow more greenish
-make te "details bigger"
-sharpen it up a little

^^

 

[Slaydon]

Looks good, maybe recolor the inscription

 

[krisserz]

For me it looks... strange. But let`s see what Berz will create^^

 

[Panda]

Nice list

 

[~Void~]

The perspective fails for an icon.

 

[-Berz-]

Why is that?

 

[Somnium]

Well I like it. And I think i will use it in my map, depending on size issues but if I can i will squeeze it in xD

-Somnium

 

[-Berz-]

Feel free to use it ^^

 

[Panda]

Void means is how the icon is placed i believe.

 

[Rmx]

I am honored to be killed with this Dagger icon ^^

This icon is OFF tHe HoOk !

+Rep and keep it coming BerZeKeR ^^

 

[-Berz-]

Rmx, lol, don't lie... :<

 

[Rmx]

Rmx, lol, don't lie... :<

Man i am not lying :O, i like this blade icon, i'm going to use it in my new map ^^

 

[-Berz-]

OK, then

 

[calex3]

nice....i don't really need this but it is good.... i need blue icons()water or frost()...
could you make one lease

 

[-Berz-]

Calex, mabe, we'll see ^^

 

[calex3]

tnx !

 

[Paladon]

It doesn't look like metal at all. Sorry dude :/

 

[-Berz-]

Some changes

Here

to

Contarast, made the whole thing a bit disordered, but it looks much better when zoomed down :>

 

[breebree123]

useful i think. .BTW nice icon. .5/5

 

[-Berz-]

Damn now it's way o bright right? :<

 

[krisserz]

I still don`t know what`s wrong for me. But I think, that if you`d like to make it really better you will have to remake it all.

 

[-Berz-]

Yeah, there isnt much lef to do to make it better... besides start all over.

Now I'll wait if it gets approved ok, and if it gets rejected ok too..

 

[TheHunterKiller]

The glow looks kinda weird... Everything else is nice .
4/5

 

[krisserz]

Now, it`s too dark I think...

 

[Zombie]

The glow seems to be solid and the blade lacks shading. The curve is still misshaped, fixing that would give you a major adventage.

 

[-Berz-]

I'll try to fix it up

Thanks for your time zombie ^^

 

[~Void~]

The glow lacks... features. Try some spots of highlights, maybe some lines of highlights, or anything really, it'll make it look nicer.

 

[Panda]

Honestly, i don't like the overall format but its a nice icon.