BTNchaoschosen

[Moderator]

13:19, 15th Jul 2009
zombie2279: Even though the majority is not freehand, it turned out to be really awesome and since the original artwork is by you aswell, I'll approve this for now.

 

[Potluck]

very well constructed and original icon 5/5

 

[a7xpwns3]

Asking for rep = negrep.

 

[The Panda]

Although quite nice you might wanna give us just a big picture of this just to make sure.

Review,
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1:Some of the skin needs to be reworked.
2:Lips can be better.
3:Background needs to be a little more vibrant and better.
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(All my recommendations to your icon, you can choose to use these or not, your choice.)
Army-of-pandas.

 

[Godslayer]

ofc i do

 

[a7xpwns3]

"Some of the skin"...?

Go into detail on what he needs to change and where he needs to- change it.

 

[Godslayer]

about the skin i have lips i have to aggre, they dont look too great, but the skin is ok like that in my mind. well i didnt make that 4 a high rezz pic, u know @ 58 x 58 pixels noone cares about this 2 pixels of lips i thought.

 

[The Panda]

What i mean by that is he needs to clear up some of the guys skin like rework it.
But i meant to say, the chin it just needed reworked.

 

[Deolrin]

Dude, remove the "give me +Rep" part of your icon description, it's against the site rules to ask for +Rep. Anyways, it's a nice icon, so yeah... +Rep

 

[The Panda]

Overall its good just needs to be touched up a bit, and wait till Moderator checks it.

 

[-Berz-]

There is no eyes Just empty white holes ^^

Thou it makes it somehow special, but think what you can do with it

~Berz

 

[Godslayer]

Dude, remove the "give me +Rep" part of your icon description, it's against the site rules to ask for +Rep. Anyways, it's a nice icon, so yeah... +Rep

oh... thx u wrote that, i didnt know

 

[Misha]

neat icon ....

 

[~Void~]

It doesn't have a neck... well it's a good drawing but it fails as an icon. 2.5/5

 

[Godslayer]

man your realy hard are ya?
i have nothin about constructive qritique, but saying it fails as an icon doesnt help a bit...

 

[~Void~]

man your realy hard are ya?
i have nothin about constructive qritique, but saying it fails as an icon doesnt help a bit...

I'm a real harsh critic.

Anyways, I just don't think the perspective works for a WC3 icon. Maybe if you rotated the perspective a bit to the right, so we could see more of the face, it would fit better with other WC3 icons.

Furthermore, I suggest you flip the icon horizontally, because the main use I see for this is as a hero icon, and in its current state, it would be facing an odd direction in game.... It would be facing off the screen.

Oh, and don't forget to add a neck. It looks like a severed head right now, and if that's what you intended it to be, this is a completely wrong perspective for a severed head

 

[Godslayer]

this is what i am talking about dude!
u are totaly right about the perspective, but i made the perspective under the aspect to make it look original.
but i think im gonna make this more wc3-iconlike 4 other people.
(i also thought of makingit an passive ability, but thats an other story )

 

[The Panda]

Already approved, changes shouldnt be made.

 

[a7xpwns3]

Approved doesn't mean don't change things...

 

[~Void~]

Approved doesn't mean don't change things...

This.

 

[a7xpwns3]

This?

 

[~Void~]

That.

 

[a7xpwns3]

Ah. So you second that?

I third myself.

 

[Godslayer]

wtf?

no armyofpandas is right, its aprooved so i wont change it, but i will make diffrent versions and upload them in a zip

 

[breebree123]

very nice, i may say. .5/5

 

[~Void~]

wtf?

no armyofpandas is right, its aprooved so i wont change it, but i will make diffrent versions and upload them in a zip

It would probably be better to update this. We don't really want to spam the resource section with multiple versions of the same icon, so you may as well replace the crappier one with the better one.

 

[Godslayer]

i think i dont spam anywhere, when i post it as zip in pastebin, and add a dl-link in the item desctription aswell as some pics of the other versions

 

[~Void~]

I'd be happier if you just updated it.

 

[Godslayer]

gtk but i dont work for your satisfaction

 

[War_Golum]

very very well done