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21:29, 15th Oct 2009
enjoy: You haven't added shading and highlights as suggested. Also needs more definition. The background and blade blends to much in with eachother. Change the background color, and again, define the blade more. Fix the shape, so it looks more sharp in the edges ( this can also be done with proper shading and highlights. ) Make the handle more straight, and more wood like. Maybe some more details.
enjoy: You haven't added shading and highlights as suggested. Also needs more definition. The background and blade blends to much in with eachother. Change the background color, and again, define the blade more. Fix the shape, so it looks more sharp in the edges ( this can also be done with proper shading and highlights. ) Make the handle more straight, and more wood like. Maybe some more details.