BTNAmbush

[Moderator]

01:57, 6th Feb 2010
enjoy: The face looks lulzy.. Should only be the eyes showing.. A mouth is not pyramid shaped. Also, the arrow head curves weird on the top part? Fix the shape so it's straight.

enjoy: Firstly, the face should be behind the leafs, the leafs and the face should not blend in with eachother. Also the face looks alittle funny. I think you should make half of the face black, like completly covered in shadows, and the nose should probably be alittle shorter, and thinner. Nightelfs have kinda thin noses.

 

[Latecat]

to tell the truth it doesnt really look like an ambush to me, but it is usefull still.

Rating:
Quality: 4/5 - good!
Usefullness: 3/5 - Neutral.
In-game look: -/5 - unable to check atm.
Creativity: 4/5 - Good!
Other:
Positive
+ I like it.
+ Can be useful
+ Creative.
+ Unique
Neutral
>> doesnt really look like an 'ambush'.

Negative
- The face looks like it would face either correct way or face a completely different way (like it would watch to the right)

Total: 14/15 ~ 5/5 - Great!
Overall: great icon. I like it alot.

 

[havard1993]

looks like an arrow fired by a shadow with eyes

Then your see correctly

Then win for me ?

 

[-Berz-]

looks like an arrow fired by a shadow with eyes

Then your see correctly

 

[Kingz]

What is the white thingy under the eyes?

Looks odd.

Also i would remove the eyes if i were you, the icon would be good even without them.

 

[Naim]

looks like an arrow fired by a shadow with eyes
- Then your see correctly

I will have to agree with this i think. Make it more Speary!

[APPROVED]

 

[Mainywc3sear]

awesome

 

[The Panda]

Looks great man.

 

[X-OMG-X]

Looks really great and the details in the background and the leafs seems to turn out quite nice. Overall, a nice icon. Just remove the eyes. It ruins the icon quite much

 

[krisserz]

Umm, well. That something hidden is for sure not night elf ;p
And IMO it doesn`t look good with the rest of the icon. Like Kingz said.
The rest is really nice.

 

[-Berz-]

Well it the smile was pyra's idea and he also agreed with the eyes, I'll just wait what mods will say.

Anyway thanks for the comments.

 

[AlienArsonist]

It all looks nice except for that little white thing under the eyes. If its a mouth make it more clear

 

[AlienAtSystem]

The arrow looks not well placed in relation to the eyes. Maybe you should either make it look more like a spear or add the shade of an bow.

The mouth should be improved as said before, its a triangle right now.

The leaves are great.

 

[Deolrin]

I would recommend to remove the face and to draw a darkened\half-black(covered in shadow) bow that fires the arrow. It could make the icon much better, imo.

 

[tee.dubs]

its too bad i abandoned my project and any will to make any maps again, this would've been perfect for almost anything. i'm sure it'll be perfect for many other to come.

 

[kola]

hmm. i wouldnt remove the smile. but what is bad is the way u made it. the shape is good, some cartoons and thing like this make same smiles but the smiles arent just a solid white piece. its like a light (its flashing). so give it a light effect, same for eyes.

 

[67chrome]

That's an arrow? Looks more like a spear with it's lack of tail feathers and angle in relation to the face. I think the leaves and lighting is great. I think the arrow/spear is great. The face could work to, but I think all the individual parts don't work with as much synergy atm as the could. If it's an arrow I'd recommend changing the angle to make it look more plausible to be coming from the smiley face, if you just blend the end of it into the shadows it could make a decent spear though to.

 

[-Berz-]

OK, updated. I kept the leaves but I changed the inner content. Hope you like it.

 

[Azsure]

Nice! useful and creative! it just need some more details for the face because it looks blurry.

 

[-Berz-]

It is blurry because it fades in the dark.

 

[TheHunterKiller]

Very nice. The face is kinda hidden, i didn't see it when i first looked at it. Overall a nice icon.
4/5.