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--------Border of Dalaran--------

My second 1on1 map, its way better than the first 1on1 map "LaughingDemon"

here link to "LaughingDemon": http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps.php?id=ohu59i

Here the story of this map:

Dalaran was one of the original city-states founded during the Arathorian empire. Since its inception, the city has served as a hub of magical knowledge and experimentation in Lordaeron and the world.


(based on the real "Blizzard E." story,thanks to "Blizzard E.")

----Stuff----

+all staring-mines have 18k gold
+2 mines in the corners have 15k
+2 middle mines have 13,5k
+2 goblin-shops
+2 taverns


----Credits----

Once more, thx to Blizz
Thanks to everyone who download this
Thanks for that mod. who will review this map soon =)

GL % HF

Keywords:
Dalaran,Magic,Wizzard,Skill,Spell,1on1,Jaina,Gandalf
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Border of Dalaran (Map)

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13:43, 16th Aug 2008 Septimus: Good terrain, but doesn't look like a city. http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/783835-post4.html

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13:43, 16th Aug 2008
Septimus:

Good terrain, but doesn't look like a city.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/783835-post4.html
 
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This map had been examined by Alexis Septimus.
If you think this map review is not accurate or require another review, feel free to contact Alexis Septimus. But, map would only be review again for second time and also for the last time unless under certain circumstances. It would be selfish to request constantly a mod/admin to keep review your map as there is many other maps waiting for approval as well.

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Map Review
1) Terrain - Good (4)
2) Ingenuity -
3) Minor Error -
4) Replay Value - Excellent (5)
5) Fun factor/gameplay - Excellent (5)
6) Use of imported material -
7) Single player -
8) AI support -
9) Camera -
10) Originality -
11) File Size - Excellent (5)
12) Balancing -
13) Packaging - Excellent (5)
14) Credits -
15) Storyline - Average (3)
16) Theme -
17) Protection - Excellent (5)
18) Quality - Excellent (5)
19) Description/Information - Excellent (5)
20) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Excellent (5)

Total Accumulation Point : 47/50 + 31 (Review) = 81

[+] - Well develop terrain
[!] - Although the terrain develop quite well, try add some destructible/doodad along the road instead of the edge of it. It make it look rather dull and bland out of compression.
[-] - Doesn't look like a city to me

Review : The middle of the city have been develop quite well, but it lack of a city environment. If been view carefully, it look more like a park instead of a city.

City should have house, citizen and etc etc... I am sure you know what I mean.

As for resources, creep and item drop. Everthing else look fine.

Another 31 points for this map.

Rating & Miscellaneous information
Score - 81/100
Rating - 4/5
Condition - Good
Status - Approve
Review - 1
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Its just unfair..that guys didnt even comment "why they rate with 1/5" i would understand it if they give facts...but you know-they do it for fun...or to make other maps looking bad cuz rating...(no reason--no nice attitude) So if he would tell me the reason...i would forgive him...
And let this downrater make a good meelemap...we´ll see only shit!
 
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