Black Abyss

[Naze]

Hi all,

As you can see, I couldn't find a better name =P

It is supposed to be a sad and lifeless place. Crits are welcome!

 

[Celaquil]

In my oppinion there is a overspam of shrubs on the foreground.
Also, the sky do not fit with the overall feel of the terrain.
Fix these two details, and it will look better.

 

[ady_illidan]

yes, the sky is the main "bug"
a darker one will look nicer

 

[Sabertooth]

The sky DOES fit, in my opinion, and makes the terrain better. The shrub spam really isn't annoying here, and it just looks very nice. The fallen columns and such add are a nice touch.
I'd just remove that shrub that's shooting up blocking the closest fallen column, that looks ugly. =P

 

[Naze]

Hmmm.... I got what you meant.

Actually, about the sky, it is the cooler I found... the gray looks is too boring. I mean, really boring. You know, it is like "MAH GAWD WATABORING!".

ok, ok.

Here is the picture with the grey sky and you'll tell what you think. I think it is boring =P Also, I added a background - I think that it was what was missing!

 

[Gilles]

These areas are far too plain and look ugly. For the one in the distance, maybe add small trees to give the terrain depth. For the closer areas on the side of the hill maybe either block out with fog, or add some plants.

 

[~Void~]

Why is the cliff grass tiles? That's probably the only really bad thing about this.

 

[Celaquil]

You can still use the blue one, only set the time of day (should be located right under where you set the sky) to midnight or something more fitting.

 

[Naze]

Thx for the critcism, people.

Yeah, I'll leave this terrain now... It was just for a training.

At least I learned from this.