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bavarianclownabo!.blp

At first i have to give credit to all this nice tutorials here!
THANKS!

Well i tryed to make a bavrian clown abo i hope you like it!
Post what you like or what you dont like and give some ideas for improvements!
just spam spam spam :D

U'll see there are some parts that i dont changed but the rest has been done by me!
Its full freehand so give credits if you use this skin for your map, as your new best friend or anything else!
Dont post it on other pages!

Have fun with it!

Update1: 1st try to make a better rust-effect

Update2: - Replace flesh/skin at stomach with shirt and pants
- Sharpned the whole skin
- New Screenshot

Update3: - Changed stomach to a mouth, i hope you like it
- New Screenshot

Update4: - Darkned the shirt
- Light up the arms and improve the hair on them
- Light up the weapons and addet some blood on them
- Added the rope to the arms and to the hook
- Improved the look of the buttons
- New Screenshot

All in all i tryed to make it more creepier and fix some problemes in the skin!
Tell me what you think about it now, please!



atm i have time again! please tell me what i can improve on this skin!



Keywords:
abo, abomination, ax, clown, bavarian, german, freak, butcher, evil, blood, undead
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Bavarian-Clown-Abo (Texture)

Reviews
14:39, 10th Nov 2008 Hawkwing: Very nicely done. You've obviously been practicing.

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14:39, 10th Nov 2008
Hawkwing: Very nicely done. You've obviously been practicing.
 
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scary o_O but i like it . i dont like clowns tho 3/5 could be a little better.

what exactly could be better?

OMG this looks great! Well done +rep

thank you!

looks funny, 3/5

funny = 3/5 oh i have learned something here :)

Nicely executed and fairly creative. You could have gotten a little more imaginative with the weapons but overall this is an exceptional skin. I rate a 4/5 because nothing it perfect. =P

thanks! you dont like the rusty effect on the weapons? maybe its soooo bad that you cant see that it should be rust :D yes i try to improve that
what do you think about more blood?
 
Level 9
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Its damn, that it has that meat-wound.
You could alpha it away, but it would still look fun.

There is a model with no wound, you could skin that one too.

Anyways, skin is till to blurry, and hes minor flawles overally.
Keep working on it thou!

Ok! it try to change the meat-wound into the shirt and the pants and nail the pants in the stomach.
But what can i do against the blur?
 
Level 22
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Dont use that one. Then its not a real skin. Then you would need model + skin.

I knew this one existed, but its just not the same, to use a custom skin, on a custom model, if those arnt made to fit each other.

Anyways, about the blur, scale the whole skin up to 4x the size, draw, and scale into normal size.
I think that will help.

You can also use the sharpen filter.
 
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Ohh, yea i can.. But.. Whats with the inner organs hanging out? Arnt they supposed to go away to?
Same for the ribs.

do you think i paint new organs to alpha them after? :D
well i tryed to alpha the ribs, but i didnt work, maybe iam just toooo stupid for it


well this way is the best i think! a big hole isnt that what i wanted, but i think the "organ"(at the moment a red big ball) in the middle should be improved. what do you think about a heart with some veins?!
and i think about to add to the outhanging organs some more yellow parts.


thanks for all posts so far, in my opinion since you gave me your hints and ideas here, the skin has become so much better.


if you have other ideas to improve this skin. TELL ME THEM
you can spam if the ideas are good - np!
 
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do something silly, clowney xD that'll add to the creepyness =3

Maybe a puppy dog with 3 legs popping out of his stomach. =D

Well guys :D i rly tried a 3leged-dog! but it just looked tooo good for this page, i think i ll go make money with it! just a joke... it simply sucked! maybe some guys who have better freehand skills then me could manage it.

I though about the stomach and i got an idea. "Lets make a bad looking mouth!"
I made a screenshot, maybe you can catch the roof of the mouth and the tongue.

mouthqg2.jpg


Please tell me what you think about it!
And i hope its silly enaugh for you :D
 
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This model is nice and very original. Plz change the weapon. I suggest to draw the face of your model in his weapon such like this:
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(I made the concept art for the axe)* Give me credits if you use my idea on it.


Also, try to change his pants to a colorful clown pants using stripes (white, black and red).


well nice ideas but the name isnt Clown-Abomination... it is Bavarian-Clown-Abomination, so the pants make this abo to a bavarian.
And i think this rusty weapons make it more creepy... then the weapons with the faces. If i have time i'll try to realize this, but i think it doesnt match that good this skin.

Thanks anyways for the good ideas to improve my skin!
 
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