bavarianclownabo!.blp

[Moderator]

14:39, 10th Nov 2008
Hawkwing: Very nicely done. You've obviously been practicing.

 

[Darky99]

scary but i like it . i dont like clowns tho ok its better

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

OMG this looks great! Well done +rep

 

[D1000]

looks funny, 3/5
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[StaberFire]

Nicely executed and fairly creative. You could have gotten a little more imaginative with the weapons but overall this is an exceptional skin. I rate a 4/5 because nothing it perfect. =P

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

scary but i like it . i dont like clowns tho 3/5 could be a little better.

what exactly could be better?

OMG this looks great! Well done +rep

thank you!

looks funny, 3/5

funny = 3/5 oh i have learned something here

Nicely executed and fairly creative. You could have gotten a little more imaginative with the weapons but overall this is an exceptional skin. I rate a 4/5 because nothing it perfect. =P

thanks! you dont like the rusty effect on the weapons? maybe its soooo bad that you cant see that it should be rust yes i try to improve that
what do you think about more blood?

 

[Grog50]

Not Bad, but its waaaaay to blurry

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

Not Bad, but its waaaaay to blurry

ok thanks for hint! i sharpned it a bit. i hope its less blurry now!

 

[StaberFire]

It's hard to tell it's rust because it's too blended. Try to make it a little more grainy if you know what I mean.

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

thx for all who tell me whats bad on this skin that i can improve it
many eyes see more then my 2 eyes + i havent got that much experience!

It's hard to tell it's rust because it's too blended. Try to make it a little more grainy if you know what I mean.

ok! i try it

 

[Panda]

Nice skin +rep

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Its damn, that it has that meat-wound.
You could alpha it away, but it would still look fun.

There is a model with no wound, you could skin that one too.

Anyways, skin is till to blurry, and hes minor flawles overally.
Keep working on it thou!

 

[Zerox]

Pretty good. Its a whole new unit now.

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

Its damn, that it has that meat-wound.
You could alpha it away, but it would still look fun.

There is a model with no wound, you could skin that one too.

Anyways, skin is till to blurry, and hes minor flawles overally.
Keep working on it thou!

Ok! it try to change the meat-wound into the shirt and the pants and nail the pants in the stomach.
But what can i do against the blur?

 

[Devine]

suprise! Intact Stomach-ed Abomination - The Hive Workshop - A Warcraft III Modding Site

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Dont use that one. Then its not a real skin. Then you would need model + skin.

I knew this one existed, but its just not the same, to use a custom skin, on a custom model, if those arnt made to fit each other.

Anyways, about the blur, scale the whole skin up to 4x the size, draw, and scale into normal size.
I think that will help.

You can also use the sharpen filter.

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

Updated:
-sharpned it
-alphaed the stomach

 

[Misha]

Pretty good. Its a whole new unit now.

My, my...... ye olle abominey has never been so clean =3

EDIT: the mouth red thingie could use some detailing

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

EDIT: the mouth red thingie could use some detailing

well i think its ok for makeup, but try to detail it if i have some free time

 

[TheBlooddancer]

New screenie?
I cant see the alpha thing.

 

[oh_snap]

This sure is an extremely unique skin; It also is freehand, and for that I'll give you credit. Good job, 4/5

~Snap

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

i changed the stomach parts as you see here. i alphaed the parts with the pants. but i didnt alpha the other parts to disrupte this shirt at this positon.

i hope you can see know what i did.

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Ohh, yea i can.. But.. Whats with the inner organs hanging out? Arnt they supposed to go away to?
Same for the ribs.

But that may ruin the model you want.

 

[StaberFire]

Yes, alpha-ing that entire part would just leave a big gaping hole in his stomach, it looks better this way. Although you could probably alpha out the intestines, those are 1-sided.

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

Ohh, yea i can.. But.. Whats with the inner organs hanging out? Arnt they supposed to go away to?
Same for the ribs.

do you think i paint new organs to alpha them after?
well i tryed to alpha the ribs, but i didnt work, maybe iam just toooo stupid for it


well this way is the best i think! a big hole isnt that what i wanted, but i think the "organ"(at the moment a red big ball) in the middle should be improved. what do you think about a heart with some veins?!
and i think about to add to the outhanging organs some more yellow parts.


thanks for all posts so far, in my opinion since you gave me your hints and ideas here, the skin has become so much better.


if you have other ideas to improve this skin. TELL ME THEM
you can spam if the ideas are good - np!

 

[i_mOck_death]

Category: Undead, Creep, Diablo, Demon
personally i think u should add clown into the category list just because it is a clown lol
i love the creepiness of the skin also
4/5 in my opinion

 

[Misha]

well this way is the best i think! a big hole isnt that what i wanted, but i think the "organ"(at the moment a red big ball) in the middle should be improved. what do you think about a heart with some veins?!

do something silly, clowney xD that'll add to the creepyness =3

 

[StaberFire]

Maybe a puppy dog with 3 legs popping out of his stomach. =D

Lawl kidding.

 

[Craka_J]

Love the art style you gave this. Looks like something out of a comic book.

~Craka_J

 

[StaberFire]

Yeah reminds me of the clown jerk from Spawn.

 

[Lambsauce]

if you give this 3/5 just beacos you dislike clowns you are stupid ;3

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

do something silly, clowney xD that'll add to the creepyness =3

Maybe a puppy dog with 3 legs popping out of his stomach. =D

Well guys i rly tried a 3leged-dog! but it just looked tooo good for this page, i think i ll go make money with it! just a joke... it simply sucked! maybe some guys who have better freehand skills then me could manage it.

I though about the stomach and i got an idea. "Lets make a bad looking mouth!"
I made a screenshot, maybe you can catch the roof of the mouth and the tongue.

Please tell me what you think about it!
And i hope its silly enaugh for you

 

[StaberFire]

Make the tongue brighter and it'll look fantastic. Reminds me of predator. =P

 

[cHeRoL]

It has big mouth xD.

 

[Craka_J]

Indeed he does have a big mouth. And you know what they say about guys with big mouths...

I rated this a 3/5. It's an awesome skin and all, but the texture seems a little too solid. Fits perfectly in WC3 though.

~Craka_J

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

I rated this a 3/5. It's an awesome skin and all, but the texture seems a little too solid. Fits perfectly in WC3 though.

3/5 for an awesome skin?! what can i do better then?

 

[Craka_J]

His shirt is the problem, mainly. Its too white. Add more detail to it and maybe shading.

~Craka_J

 

[Rypleys]

This model is nice and very original. Plz change the weapon. I suggest to draw the face of your model in his weapon such like this:
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x253/Rypleys/myclownaxe.jpg
(I made the concept art for the axe)* Give me credits if you use my idea on it.

Thanx

 

[Titanhex]

Why is this clown so serious?

All jokes aside it's a pretty creative use of the abom that seems properly executed. Good work.

 

[Rypleys]

Also, try to change his pants to a colorful clown pants using stripes (white, black and red).

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

This model is nice and very original. Plz change the weapon. I suggest to draw the face of your model in his weapon such like this:
Image hosting, free photo sharing & video sharing at Photobucket
(I made the concept art for the axe)* Give me credits if you use my idea on it.


Also, try to change his pants to a colorful clown pants using stripes (white, black and red).

well nice ideas but the name isnt Clown-Abomination... it is Bavarian-Clown-Abomination, so the pants make this abo to a bavarian.
And i think this rusty weapons make it more creepy... then the weapons with the faces. If i have time i'll try to realize this, but i think it doesnt match that good this skin.

Thanks anyways for the good ideas to improve my skin!

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

Why is this clown so serious?

All jokes aside it's a pretty creative use of the abom that seems properly executed. Good work.

hmmm... so i as you why is the Joker in Batman so serious or Captain Spaldin in house of 1000 corpses?

--> Cause creepy phsycho clowns are just the best

 

[StaberFire]

Double post for teh phailz0rz.

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

what should phailz0r be, mr 1337?

 

[StaberFire]

Syntax Err
Line 1: Expected teh nubz

 

[The Final Sin]

ZZZZZZ boring, make sometin creepier, good tho 4/5

 

[markone]

lack on some details, but in general idea is gr8
4/5

 

[Misha]

perfect finish: 5/5
~thread Closed~
xD can't do that xD

 

[Ordworse]

looks funny, 3/5
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