Bakabox

[Moderator]

16:36, 25th Oct 2012
Magtheridon96: Approved.

 

[torques]

1. nice & fun
2. a rarely seen kind of spell (unique)
3. can't much much leaks
4. lots of configurable
5. long triggers

-Recommended-

 

[Almia]

1.Nice idea
2.Dont use your own knockback script,use Bribes,Defskulls, or mine.
3.lots of actions
4.cant see any leaks.
5.Post the triggers
6.I think this will be approved because it is hardcoded.

 

[Magtheridon96]

Bro-tip

• Set TempPoint[0] = (Position of Vault_TargetUnit)
• Custom script: call SetUnitX( GetLastCreatedUnit(), GetLocationX( udg_TempPoint[0] ) )
• Custom script: call SetUnitY( GetLastCreatedUnit(), GetLocationY( udg_TempPoint[0] ) )
• Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_TempPoint[0])

->

• Custom script: call SetUnitX(bj_lastCreatedUnit, GetUnitX(udg_Vault_TargetUnit))
• Custom script: call SetUnitY(bj_lastCreatedUnit, GetUnitY(udg_Vault_TargetUnit))

Another Bro-tip

You could also store repeating function calls (Like (Last created unit)) into variables so you wouldn't have to constantly repeat the calls over and over again.

The Vault Init function is repeating the (Key (Last created unit)) function call far too many times.
You can store this into a variable like so:
Custom script: set udg_TempInt = GetHandleId(bj_lastCreatedUnit)

You can apply this to pretty much any instance in which you're repeating something in parentheses more than once, like here:

Code

• Hashtable - Save Handle Of(Load 0 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable) as 0 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 5 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 1 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 36 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 2 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 37 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 3 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 6 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 4 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 10 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 5 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 15 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 6 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 38 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 7 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 39 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 8 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 19 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 9 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 40 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 10 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 41 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 11 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 30 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 12 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 31 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 13 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 32 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 14 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 33 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 15 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable
  • Hashtable - Save (Load 34 of (Key TempHandle) from Vault_Hashtable) as 16 of (Key (Load 35 of (Key TempHandle) in Vault_Hashtable)) in Vault_Hashtable

Another one

Things like this:

• If (Vault_Count Greater than 0) then do (For each (Integer Vault_Integer) from 1 to Vault_Count, do (Hashtable - Save Handle Of(Load (50 + Vault_Integer) of (Key Vault_Handle) in Vault_Hashtable) as (50 + Vault_Integer) of (Key (Last created unit)) in Vault_Hashtable)) else do (Do nothing)

Are totally unreadable and hard to modify, we always recommend using the If blocks that execute multiple actions at all times.

And yet another bro-tip :D

• Animation - Change (Last created unit)'s size to (Vault_SizeCurrent%, Vault_SizeCurrent%, Vault_SizeCurrent%) of its original size

does the same thing as

• Animation - Change (Last created unit)'s size to (Vault_SizeCurrent%, 0.00%, 0.00%) of its original size

except the second one is slightly faster and shorter.

 

[Lambdadelta]

This description formatting looks a bit like how I format. *giggle* How interesting, child of man.

 

[Almia]

your trigger has a bold font.
Also change the text,it hurts my eyes T^T

 

[rulerofiron99]

I like this spell so much. <3

Please change the text colour though D:

 

[CoLd Bon3]

This is really good, brah! I really like how the box drops and then shrinks. Only one thing i don't like - the description of the spell... it's really annoying. Black text against dark background is just bad. However, here we rate the spell, not the description, so you get fully deserved :
5/5 and +rep

 

[Imadori]

Please change the text colour though D:

Black text against dark background is just bad

It seems like you two don't understand its beauty.
BLACK IS COMPATIBLE OF ALL COLORS! BLACK IS GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD!
The spoilers are black, so I want the text to be black too, it merges!

 

[CoLd Bon3]

My jokey opinion

 

[Felipe Gormadoc]

Very nice, 5/5
's not everyday that we've a box falling from the sky '-'

 

[Tal'Rarity]

Could you provide a trigger/button/key/method to allow a unit be taken out of the box instantly upon a key hit or click twice?

I can't figure it out because I have never bothered to learn hashtables.
Seems cool, but a 4/5 from me. Really unique though hard to modify.

 

[Faith]

Lol that's a cute spell. Very unique and well done too.
5/5

 

[Bboy Moose]

We need more spells like this :>