Avenger (HeroArena) v.2.5 (beta)

[Moderator]

19:36, 4th Sep 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected (until updated)

 

[Soul Theft]

fix up description add screenshots

 

[commoe]

what is wrong with my description and how do i post screen shots

plus to anyone who can host and would LIKE to host for me please tell me. i, myself, cannot so any help would very much be appriceated

I could also use some map art.

 

[Cweener]

Posts merged, please in the future don't double post.
It's against the rules.
Use the Edit button instead.

Your description lacks, to say the least.

If you'd like some examples of a good description try the following links.
Shining Waters by R.Gaming_Strike
Avatar by dj0z

 

[light bolt30]

Use these BB Codes to fix up that description, use hidden tags for updates and add some screenshots.

 

[-Kobas-]

Map Size: 160x160
Playable Map Size: 128x128

It seams that you lost a lot of space there

 

[commoe]

lol i guess so... too bad no one has offered to host for me yet

 

[Cweener]

You ever heard of Garena?
If not, Google it, learn how to use it and download.

A great thing for reviewers and mapmakers alike.

 

[-Kobas-]

You can always use PUBLIC BOT to host map for ya on B Net!

 

[cboy123]

Is this BETA? I thought Mr. "Rules" said that no WIP is allowed. Ops sorry my bad.
BTW. Like everybody said, improve the description! Add Screenies!.

Me: Is Beta Maps are allowed to be upload Mr. "Rules"
Mr. "Rules":_____________________________
Me: Thanks. (Even though I got no answer.)

 

[Cweener]

@cboy.
Late stage BETA maps are allowed yes.
As long as they are fully playable, and can still provide some entertainment value.

 

[commoe]

this isnt worth it. i put in good effort into this map and all you guys do is complain. "oh he doesnt have a good description....RANT RANT RANT!" see if i ever post on here anymore. if i want people to play my map ill just post it somewhere like epicwar or something. i doubt any of you actually played the game

 

[dead-man-walking]

this isnt worth it. i put in good effort into this map and all you guys do is complain. "oh he doesnt have a good description....RANT RANT RANT!" see if i ever post on here anymore. if i want people to play my map ill just post it somewhere like epicwar or something. i doubt any of you actually played the game

It's not their fault to not play a map that doesn't have something that would tickle them into playing it.

Or is it?

For an easier analogy of your problem, would you eat something that doesn't look good except if you already know that it is tasty or something?

~Reported for not giving a rat's ass to others' advice

 

[Cweener]

this isnt worth it. i put in good effort into this map and all you guys do is complain. "oh he doesnt have a good description....RANT RANT RANT!" see if i ever post on here anymore. if i want people to play my map ill just post it somewhere like epicwar or something. i doubt any of you actually played the game

You realize not one post in this thread has been wrong right?
We are trying to help you more than anything else.
If I had seen a mean post, I would've removed it, but all I see is helpful comments.

You need a description. It's in the rules.
I can reject this right now for it not having a good enough description.
I was just hoping it'd change, because I really don't like rejecting maps.

Anyways, you can add screenshots by uploading them to a site such as imageshack or even this site has a pastebin. (link is in the top left area of your screen)
next,

instructions for imageshack

After it's done uploading it, click the image.
You should see a thumbnail of it and a lot of fields with info in them.
Go to the one that says "Direct" and copy this url.
then come to your description and paste it where you want it.

instructions for thw

Click on the image once it's done uploading and it should become the whole screen.
Now, go to your address bar, and copy that address.
then come to your description and paste it where you want it.

After you've done either of those,
put

directly after that same url.
Repeat this process for each no picture you want.

 

[ap0calypse]

Brief overview:

• Triggers leak, there are no (used) variables.
• Poor tooltips.
• Incorrect icon positions / no hotkeys.
• Low gameplay value (kill creeps / enemies).
• No victory condition.