Autumn temple

[Volvox]

I just felt like doing something mystical and elvish. Here's what i came up with.

 

[redscores]

The Grass looks very odd in that environment... much too bright and its quite empty, needs some mysthical flair.

 

[Volvox]

Everybody complains about my grass being too bright... I'd better start tinting it twice as dark.

 

[syltman]

Looks a bit flat and boring in some way to me, Maybe add more grass and other plants there

 

[Ziggen]

Yeah, the grass is too bright and too high, the ground is pretty flat and doodadless, and... Autumn?

 

[Belgarath]

The grass looks good. But stick to one kind. And that tree just looks really awkward.

 

[redscores]

Eh if you think the grass looks good... then you seem to be not such a good terrainer, it pierces out, the color is far too bright, and the whole temple looks not too autumn.

 

[Belgarath]

It really doesn't have anything to do with being a good or bad terrainer, rather a matter of opinion. The temple just looks strange. BTW: I hope you're not talking about the grass in the bottom left corner ... that one looks bad.

EDIT: Okay, at a quick glance, the grass looks good, and I did that, but when looking at it longer, it doesn't look very nice. It's a nice idea though.

 

[Volvox]

Ah well, i had a bad feeling about it too. That's why i didn't save it.

 

[Oziris]

Grass bright,Dont like Barranes tree,i dont like what u used around that Barranes tree i dont know even what it is.

 

[Volvox]

I like the background. Those are swamp trees from utm 3.0.

 

[Gilles]

The grass is too spread out and even. I'd do it different. Not sure how. Clump it with rocks or something.

 

[Volvox]

That was my idea at first but then i realized that i gotta go in like 10 minutes so i've just put it this way.

 

[SILLYbear]

grass appears out of nowhere in huge tufts, on trim land. maybe you can put smaller weeds around them; or maybe you can just intersperse plenty of smaller grasses around the land + some rocks and variate soil contour .

 

[Naze]

lol, the way that the map ends looks like a first person shooter game...

 

[The_wand_mirror]

Yeah, the grass is too bright and too high, the ground is pretty flat and doodadless, and... Autumn?

It's like the same color of the ground texture =/

I like it.

And yeah... this is not autumn at all..

 

[Volvox]

It has an autumn tree in the middle. That was the point of the autumn part. It resembles a temple in the middle of ashenvale.

 

[~Void~]

Hmm... the grass could be much smaller.

 

[The_wand_mirror]

Hmm... the grass could be much smaller.

Yeah i forgot to say that lol. I just wanted to edit my message.

It would look better if you made the grass smaller like 50% of what you have now, and then like artistically spam them xD