Arena! v2.07

[Moderator]

16:58, 3rd Feb 2009
Septimus: rejected

 

[bounty hunter2]

Here is my rating and comment:

1 - 10 points go on originality
1 - 10 points go on object editor work
1 - 10 points go on scripting
1 - 10 points go on terrain
1 - 10 points go on bug free
1 - 10 points go on gameplay*/fun factor
1 - 10 points go on lag
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting
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->That equals 80 points max.
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+ Cinematic
1 - 10 points on camera work
1 - 10 points on dialog
1 - 10 points on music and or voice acting
- Cinematic
Object editor work
* Not in cinematic
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That equals 100 points max.
To get a Hive grade over 1/5 at least 50% of the 80 (Triggered map) or of the 100 (Cinematic map) points is needed. That means at least 40 or 50 points. However if a map gets rated over 1/5 by me, that doesn't mean that I will imidietly vote it to be approved.

Originality: 6 points
Well beside the fact there were no custom spells or anything, I like the arena concept.

Object editor work: 2 points
No custom things, boring heroes, units no items.

Scripting: 2 points
Lacking scripting, I could have limitless units?

Terrain: 2 points
The terrain was done very bad. Boring, mostly plain.

Bug Free: 2 points
The dialog opened every time I entered a arena thus making me able to choose any number of units.

Gameplay/Fun Factor: 4 points
Not so bad but it is bad to switch between arenas sometimes.

Lag: 9 points
No ingame lag, decent loading time.

Proper submission and crediting: 7 point
You need images, better description.

In overall: 34 / 80
42% minimal 50% not met.
For the hive grade: 1/5 I suggest this map for: Rejection
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In overall it is a interesting idea poorly developed. With lacking custom things and bad terrain, you also have lacking scripting. Improve and update.

Good Luck in improving, bounty hunter2
I might not be checking this topic for some time. If you have any questions about the review or you update the map and want me to check it again, feel free to PM me or Visitor message me at any time.

 

[AirHead]

Object editor work: 2 points
No custom things, boring heroes, units no items.

By custom things do you mean custom models/skins?

Scripting: 2 points
Lacking scripting, I could have limitless units?

What? Are you talking about the dialogue opening every time you choose a unit? If so you should have also noticed that you get only 5 units every time.
Otherwise, what do you mean?

Terrain: 2 points
The terrain was done very bad. Boring, mostly plain.

Ok, I'll fix this up.

Bug Free: 2 points
The dialog opened every time I entered a arena thus making me able to choose any number of units.

What? you are supposed to choose a new team of units every time, but keep the same hero.

Gameplay/Fun Factor: 4 points
Not so bad but it is bad to switch between arenas sometimes.

I had that once but I thought I got rid of it. Any suggestions to remove it?

Proper submission and crediting: 7 point
You need images, better description.

Ok, I'll do that. I couldn't think of how to write the description so it ended up like that. (I did look at accepted maps to get ideas but most of that is like a change-log and things like that, that I didn't keep.)