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[Cinematic] Arena of Enanguin - Part One

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Hello hive!

After my peasant cinematics, I'm going to do a new series.
It's called 'The Arena of Enanguin'. In this, there is a young boy, who want to fight in that arena, to get honor, and popular.
Basicly, it's going to be a fighting cinematic. Except the first part :p

In the first chapter, his past (from his sixth age) will be narrated.
So only some history things, which I will maybe use in later parts.

Well, tomorrow, I'm going to italy, for two weeks, so I can't work on it.
Maybe you can watch it, and write in this thread, what can be improved etc.

After I'll come back, I will read all the posts, and try to improve it.

Thank you!
 

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It's actually looking pretty good. The only thing I would point out is the grammar in one of the last lines. "He will explain me some new techniques." I forget the exact wording but something about that line seemed off.
 
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