Archers Soldier Version

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MasterHaosis: Hey man nice work haha use gun and fire at will !!! well enough to get approved
[ ] Map scanned of viruses
[ ] Map doesnot crash WC3 as far I can see
[ ] Map is yours/seems no edited from other author
[APPROVED]

 

[DeadZero]

Yay approved! ^.^

 

[xXxTWiST3DxXx]

I will do a proper Reviewing the first thing i wake up tomorrow.

For now,please improve Descriptions and please add some screenshots on how would be the game like.

Until Further notices. 2/5

 

[light bolt30]

Terrain doesn't seem that well made..

 

[xXxTWiST3DxXx]

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♣ Story::Doesn't seem pretty fun. Please add more Abilities and Items.
♣ Combat::Yes, but since, you can only use the Fire Option, Its dull Boring.
♣ Quest::None.
♣ Sound Effects::None
♣ Internal Music::Normal Warcraft themes.
♣ External Music::None.
♣ GUI/JASS Triggering::Yes, Decent enough.
♣ Terrain::Terrain is Lacking, please add natural doodads. Here's an idea,maybe add a Camp that is made out of doodads.
♣ Gameplay::Isn't Fun.
♣ Custom Models/Skins/Icons ::Hmm..it wasn't really necessary because you only used a one custom model.

Your score is: 8//20
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Your Terrain is lacking,please add screenshots.
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[WaremDarkslayer]

I think this map deserves a 3/5 for it's design and all but I'll have to agree with light blot30 that the terrain doesn't seem that well made.

 

[light bolt30]

I think this map deserves a 3/5 for it's design and all but I'll have to agree with light blot30 that the terrain doesn't seem that well made.

Umm my name is spelt light BOLT30. Hehe blot lol.

I expect to see an improvement on the terrain before you update this map!
Suggestions for Terrain:
-Maybe at each corner there is a different feel to the environment e.g snow,mountains,hills,forests,deserts
-Use some dodads?
-Add some critters or rivers to give it a natural feeling to the environment