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Post #3, Rejected.
Post #3, Rejected.
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Adventures of Charlie
- Author(s)
- CharlieUnforgoten
- Tags
- Campaign, Medieval / Warcraft
- Size
- 133.85 KB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 143
- Created
- Jun 4, 2009
- Updated
- Jun 9, 2009
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
My Very In Progresses Campaign, hope you enjoy whats there 
Contents
Reviews
- Joined
- Aug 10, 2007
- Messages
- 49
Need a better description...
Even though your description lacks very much information I will try this out anyways.
Even though your description lacks very much information I will try this out anyways.
- Joined
- Dec 7, 2008
- Messages
- 823
>>Better description is needed.
Act 1
>>>The dialogues of the first cinematic need improvement.The time wasn't enough for me to read the whole dialogue.
>>>There were some spelling mistakes too in the first cinematic.
>>>When the footman says "Look its..."---At this sentence the footman's message appears in the quest log but not on the screen.
>>>The forest contains only of one kind of trees. No variation? That gets unnatural. Also there was wildlife or stones or anything in the forest. Try to take care of that.
>>>The small cinematic that starts when they enter the village is bad. The camera is totally static. The dialogues do not appear on the screen but are present only in the message log. There were spelling & grammar mistakes too.
>>>The village is odd. Some of the houses' gates were facing the trees & were placed in such a way that there is no way to come in or go out.
>>>The village was burned but there were no corpses or anything like that present in the whole village?
>>>The lich says farewell & then the footman & the captain go through the portal. The lich was moving towards it but when the map ended he was still present. The movement of the units needs much improvement. Also one of the footman never moved.
The story wasn't interesting. Remember that "First impression is the last impression". If you want to continue this seriously then consider making this more interesting otherwise some people may just leave this here.
The second map never started even though it is shown in this thread.
1/5 for current quality & Vote for disapproval.
>>Maps which are in very early development stage are meant for map development section.
>>Read the map submission rules before you update this.
>>There is always Warcraft III Modding Section where you can ask various questions about who to make this better. Get opinions in the map development section on this before you come into map section.
>>Read the links below.
Act 1
>>>The dialogues of the first cinematic need improvement.The time wasn't enough for me to read the whole dialogue.
>>>There were some spelling mistakes too in the first cinematic.
>>>When the footman says "Look its..."---At this sentence the footman's message appears in the quest log but not on the screen.
>>>The forest contains only of one kind of trees. No variation? That gets unnatural. Also there was wildlife or stones or anything in the forest. Try to take care of that.
>>>The small cinematic that starts when they enter the village is bad. The camera is totally static. The dialogues do not appear on the screen but are present only in the message log. There were spelling & grammar mistakes too.
>>>The village is odd. Some of the houses' gates were facing the trees & were placed in such a way that there is no way to come in or go out.
>>>The village was burned but there were no corpses or anything like that present in the whole village?
>>>The lich says farewell & then the footman & the captain go through the portal. The lich was moving towards it but when the map ended he was still present. The movement of the units needs much improvement. Also one of the footman never moved.
The story wasn't interesting. Remember that "First impression is the last impression". If you want to continue this seriously then consider making this more interesting otherwise some people may just leave this here.
The second map never started even though it is shown in this thread.
1/5 for current quality & Vote for disapproval.
>>Maps which are in very early development stage are meant for map development section.
>>Read the map submission rules before you update this.
>>There is always Warcraft III Modding Section where you can ask various questions about who to make this better. Get opinions in the map development section on this before you come into map section.
>>Read the links below.
