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A Present To The Dead

Submitted by Nagir
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
A small terrain map including a lot of trees, a catherdral, some graves and rivers.
i don't care how you use it, as long as you give me credits (and give me a link to the final product ^^ )

Story: In the middle of Lordaeron lies the graveplace where the fallen warriors of the Second War was buried. Thousands of people from all over Azeroth come to this place every year to see the graves of those who fell during the Second War. It is told that those who visits these graves can be cured of any disease, curse, injury or other forms of illness.

Keywords:
Warcraft, river, graveplace, human, lordaeron
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A Present To The Dead (Map)

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19:54, 10th Jul 2010 ap0calypse: Rejected
  1. 19:54, 10th Jul 2010
    ap0calypse: Rejected
     
  2. dead-man-walking

    dead-man-walking

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    ...Give you credits?
    But how are we supposed to click "Approve" on a Map with basically no Description at all?
     
  3. -Kobas-

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    Please improve description! I can't understand what am I supposed to do in your map!
     
  4. dead-man-walking

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    It's a Terrain Map.

    But yeah. Improve the Description.
     
  5. Crave.

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    How about story concept? Like Undead raided catacombs and made their homes there or something like that...
     
  6. Nagir

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    there. now you have a story.
     
  7. R.Gaming_Strike

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    sorry - but the terrain sucks - I really dont wanna explain why or anything like that - I just think everyone could create such a terrain so its no use...
    People love templates if they are looking awesome, but this doesnt.
     
  8. Tleno

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    Sorry, Gaming_Strike is right, templates have higher terrain quality requirements than other maps because these are only terrain, and you is not good enough even for a non-template. Immprove the terraining skills or don't upload your maps.
     
    Last edited: Jul 7, 2010
  9. Nagir

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    well, at least you could have said it in another, more positive way. instead of telling how much i suck, you could just tell what needs improvements and what i'm good at. you know, if every1 got told all the negative stuff about their creations, they wouldn't be encouraged to create more. think how you'd like to be told the same thing: positive, or negative? :pnewt:
     
  10. -Kobas-

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    First of all start with few more tiles on the ground!
    Then come custom imported doodads!
    Weather Effect!
    Fog!
    Special Effect!
    Custom Lightning!
    etc etc
     
  11. Tleno

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    You newbies and your understanding of constructive criticism...
    See, negative crtitics are better than good, because negative allows you to understand what you should work on more, while positive are useless because you already are good at something...

    So see, you should work more on the terrain for now.
     
  12. Nagir

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    well, negative critics can make someone to loose thei interest in creating more. if you only tell them what's bad without giving them hints about how they may improve it, they may quit creating for good. is that what you want?