(2)Swamp

[Moderator]

01:01, 23rd May 2013
Orcnet: fix description

 

[~DARK~]

Reserved

~Reserved ^Zealot Is Me^

 

[Binsu]

~Reserved ^Zealot Is Me^

I would really like to review this but for now not because I would give this a rating of 1/5 and voting for Rejection.... Your melee for first timer is quite bad. Let me point you some bad things:

-Your spawn location for the bases seems to bug. Both Player 1 and 2 spawned at the same location. I suggest put each spawn location to different place. Also the spawn location for your building are quite near to neutral hostiles that makes it attack them your base.
-Your terrain is really bad. Your map is quite open... yes, I did say open but not that open. There should be still some trees to block areas and you have quite a few neutral and all sides are full of neutral hostiles. Where could players even spawn when it is full of creeps?
-Your terrain is flat. You should use Raise/Lower Tools to make different levels to the ground.
-Your terrain once again is really empty. I only see few doodads on the creeps areas and in the open area, nothing.....
-The placing of gold mines are quite bad.
-There is not even a shop or maybe fountains.

Sorry but you should improve this map for now.

 

[~DARK~]

Ok I Will Improve it Thanks For Your Review Bro

 

[Orcnet]

you can read much info at the http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/map-development-202/map-submission-rules-228244/, it will help you make a decent map description

for now 'NEEDS FIX' then pm me once you are done

 

[Binsu]

Ok I Will Improve it Thanks For Your Review Bro

No problem, just review some more Melee map tutorials and you will learn alot. If you want, I can send you some tutorials through PMs? Of course, tutorial by other users.