[2] Mushroom Battlezone 1.1

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08:57, 23rd Jan 2011
-Kobas-:
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[Darkzealot_128]

Checked it, I didn't like the terrain (and melee maps need great terrain) but the item drops were balanced, you placed the units nicely, you gave them abilities, and you placed the neutral buildings nicely as well. Improve the terrain and this will be ready for approval.

 

[Eldubs]

Il get on it, its my first melee map. I am starting creating melee maps so my WE skills improve. Thank you for the advice. (the problem is that dungeon tileset has only one buildable tile)

+rep for commenting : )

 

[light bolt30]

You have some improper grammar use in the description like the first bit of the description, please take a look and read over it, hopefully you'll find the error. If you don't like the dungeon tile set you could always swap the tiles around without redoing the entire terrain.

 

[Eldubs]

Thank you for noticing me, i usually don't make mistakes but this time i suddenly did. Well, anyways thank you for the tip! +rep

Edit: I cant rep you yet, how sad...
Edit 2: I fixed my wrong english, what do you think?

 

[light bolt30]

Much better.

 

[Eldubs]

version 1.1
I improved the terrain as good as i could, hope you like it.

 

[-Kobas-]

Can you please fix next things so I can approve your map:

• Add some cliffs, using only trees (mushrooms) is bad idea, once when you destroy them your base will be unprotected from ground forces all around
• Set neutral units Target Acquisition to Campaign
• Increase map size, map borders without bounds look horrible
• Remove empty space between trees
• Fountains shouldn't be so close to base

 

[Eldubs]

Can you please fix next things so I can approve your map:

• Add some cliffs, using only trees (mushrooms) is bad idea, once when you destroy them your base will be unprotected from ground forces all around
• Set neutral units Target Acquisition to Campaign
• Increase map size, map borders without bounds look horrible
• Remove empty space between trees
• Fountains shouldn't be so close to base

Everything will be fixed along withs some improvements from my self. This was my first melee map so i wasnt really into it yet

 

[-Kobas-]

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[2] Mushroom Battlezone 1.1
Created by Eldubs ; Uploaded by: Eldubs

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• Add some cliffs, using only trees (mushrooms) is bad idea, once when you destroy them your base will be unprotected from ground forces all around
• Set neutral units Target Acquisition to Campaign
• Increase map size, map borders without bounds look horrible
• Remove empty space between trees
• Fountains shouldn't be so close to base

Sorry I can't wait anymore, if you decide to fix errors be free to do so and update map, I will gladly check it again.
Map status: Rejected

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