2 Environment Drawings

[Sephiroth_VII]

http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t218/Sephiroth_VII_photos/File0004.jpg
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t218/Sephiroth_VII_photos/File0005.jpg

Some drawings I did recently. Pencil,ColoredPencil,Pen,PrintingPaper. Scaled to 20% when I scanned them in because file size. So like the environment concept?

 

[Hawkwing]

Perspective and Proportions look really off on the first drawing. And the foreground on the second one is nice.

 

[FreshMobster]

The first one sucks 'cause as mentioned, there's practically no perspective. Didn't you take your perspective studies at art class or something? Though the concept is good, and if you have some modeling abilities, then correct render of this type of 3D structure could act out very well.
The second one reminds me of Protoss buildings.

 

[TDR]

don't say that it sucks man, it's fucking rude for fucks' fucking sake...And the perspective they teach you at art classes is bullshit and inaccurate.
So yeah, sephiroth, perspective is a HUUGE issue in those drawings that overwhelms other issues. Or is the ceiling in the first image supposed to be conical?
I wanted to make a perspective drawing tutorial, but I don't know if it'll be of much use around here.

 

[Volvox]

Columns are more screwed than the ceiling imo, the upper parts are parallel with those lover instead of going into the vanishing points. But the idea really is good, not too original but good.

 

[Sephiroth_VII]

I wanted to make a perspective drawing tutorial, but I don't know if it'll be of much use around here.

I'd find it useful. I kinda knew the first one was screwed. Its hard for me to make a ceiling and a floor.

the upper parts are parallel with those lover instead of going into the vanishing points

I would think they would be parallel because they are not going farther back or more forward so they are just verticle.