Ok lets see.
[+]You haven't been editing the map , So no credits needed/permission
[-]You haven't given any info about that the map is protected which it is.
Please add that because that's a MUST when you upload maps in The Hive Workshop.
[+]The map is in English too 100%.
[+]It's easy to notice that you have put a lot of work in your map so you'll get a + here.
This map should be UN-approved because of that no information is given about that the map is protected , Fix it please.
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Other stuff :
[+] The Gameplay ,It's fun to play , It's a bit like a zone control map.
[-]Icons , In my opinion you shouldn't use Model textures as icons and try fixing some DISBTN icons because it's quite annoying when the icons turn lime coloured.
[+/-]The terrain is well made , With structures and trees and so on , But try making the terrain more ''bumpy'' it's too flat in my opinion , Otherwise it's well made.
[+/-]You haven't been adding unnecessary models and so on , But you mixed up modern structures with some Warcraft 3 models that doesn't fit in , Like you have the C&C command center as a HQ , And then the barracks is the Orc barracks , Not a nice mix in my opinion.
[+]You give a lot information about the map , It has an intro that explains how to play and text messages appears at some times that explains even more.
[-]A little bug I found is that some units walk through the ''Structure 1 (can be captured) , Try adding some pathing blockers on the left side of the building because the pathing doesn't ''block'' units from entering there.
[-]Just another small thing , Try adding some attack sounds to the bunker & anti-air.You could probably get some free machine gun sounds in some free sounds website and just replace an unused weapon attack sound like : Wood heavy bash or so on , If you need any further details on this then send me a private message and I'll teach you.
[-]Try fixing the description on upgrades , You had like ''This is a uber upgrade and it roxors or is l33t.Lol.
That doesn't really describe the upgrade.The description I just posted maybe isn't 100% accurate but it's something like that.
I only posted the [-] here because posting every [+] would be too much , But don't worry , The map is great!