BTNPotion

Moderator · Dec 16, 2009

10:19, 17th Dec 2009
Pyramidhe@d: More definition please.

enjoy: Much much more definition required.

Misha · Dec 16, 2009

this looks like a peace of colored jello-candy, not a vial or.. whatever this is.

learn to draw straight lines.

Midnighters · Dec 16, 2009

Little harsh there don't you think Misha?

Licheus · Dec 16, 2009

I agree. Sure the icon needs much more work to reach an acceptable, approvable standard, but we should focus on telling him how to improve it rather than making him feel bad.

So, aki, it's unclear and way too blurry. Try to improve your art by maybe looking at other potions. Add shading and details. Here's some really good examples:

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/packs-542/three-tier-alchemy-potions-116902/

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/packs-542/colourbottle-152803/

Good luck. =)

Midnighters · Dec 17, 2009

Good informations Licheus, I agree with everything he said, and one other thing, do not put the glow so hard on the outside.

aki15 · Dec 17, 2009

Ok, thank you guys i'll try to make it better ;D !

Misha · Dec 17, 2009

there is nothing wrong in telling the guy to steady his hand a bit more so he can draw more awesome stuff. :3

Panda · Dec 17, 2009

Define the glass of the bottom a little more, right now it doesn't look like glass.

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