Tank Defence 0.8h

[Moderator]

17:03, 6th Jan 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[ACdestinydream]

omg bugs everywhere. theres already bug at the shops.

 

[locast]

omg bugs everywhere. theres already bug at the shops.

care to share what bugs?
its my first map so, i dun really get what you are pointing to

 

[ACdestinydream]

those items, i dont know why but some items can be clicked and they disappear.

 

[locast]

those items, i dont know why but some items can be clicked and they disappear.

you mean the infernal and the Grenade?
they are skills, buying those will allow the use of the respective skills.

right i'll rename the shop and polish the tooltips

 

[ACdestinydream]

lol. how would i know thats a skill shop... tot it was a item shop.

 

[locast]

yea thx for point that out, anymore other stuffs?
i'm currently balancing the difficulity so that its not just a chicken-feet game

 

[VampireofBlood]

Well, the Tooltips are really horrible, but for your first map, the triggering is good

 

[locast]

Well, the Tooltips are really horrible, but for your first map, the triggering is good

k thx i'll look at other map's tooltips and polish mine later on.

and triggering is very much like programming, which i'm learning in school now...
they're so similar so i naturally know the basics...

JASS still kills me thou.

 

[Sir_Astral]

Make one shaman hero, i luv shamans, he can be nice suporter with buffs and heals, give him average damage.

 

[locast]

Make one shaman hero, i luv shamans, he can be nice suporter with buffs and heals, give him average damage.

hmm a shaman tank, support skills, i'll see if i can come up with that.

 

[krisserz]

The map is horribly boring. The tanks are not well balanced. The enemy units are imbalanced aswell (for few rounds it was ok, and the next round (with frost wyrms) I`ve had to be all the time on heal. Only 4 skills, and the tank can have only 2 of them?! Small number of items (no items, which will for example incarase your armor). Bad terrain (Not horrible, but skill can be a lot better). Poor descriptions of tanks, and poor description at Hive (most of it is changelog).

The map gets from me 1/5 and I vote for rejection. No offense, but you must still put a lot of work into it.

 

[locast]

The map is horribly boring. The tanks are not well balanced. The enemy units are imbalanced aswell (for few rounds it was ok, and the next round (with frost wyrms) I`ve had to be all the time on heal. Only 4 skills, and the tank can have only 2 of them?! Small number of items (no items, which will for example incarase your armor). Bad terrain (Not horrible, but skill can be a lot better). Poor descriptions of tanks, and poor description at Hive (most of it is changelog).

The map gets from me 1/5 and I vote for rejection. No offense, but you must still put a lot of work into it.

thx for the review.
i only made this like 2 weeks ago, if it were good i would not be on my computer already, i would be like making games for a living. (first map!)



EDITS: hive description improved, post reported for unclear criticism , skills fixed, items added.
please share more details on those points you stated that i have not answered

 

[The Reborn Devil]

EDITS: post reported for unclear criticism

krisserz isn't a mod ^^

(For those who now try to scan the thread to find where he said he was a mod: He didn't say it here. I'm a mod and I saw the reason for why he reported. No, I'm not going to share that information with you )

 

[krisserz]

The map is horribly boring.

The whole goal of the map is to stand close to the spawn of enemy units, and sometimes use skills (if you have bought any)

The tanks are not well balanced.

Umm, well. I don`t remember at all, but it`s like 1k gold gives you a tank, which has 50 more damage, and the tank with ~200 dmg costs 12k (or smth like that)

The enemy units are imbalanced aswell (for few rounds it was ok, and the next round (with frost wyrms) I`ve had to be all the time on heal.

As I said... I was playin`, and it was goin` pretty good. Untill the wyrms had begun to spawn. After about 7 attacks I was dead, like other players I played with. The first enemies we were slaining without losing big amounts of HP, and that has changed immediately (too fast) with wyrms.

Only 4 skills, and the tank can have only 2 of them?!

The number of spells, which can be bought is (only) 4. And the tank can have 2 of them (when you buy 2 spells and than buy new tank you cannot buy even 1 of them, because it`s displaying a message, that you have already reached max number of spells)

Small number of items (no items, which will for example incarase your armor)

There are only poitions. There are no items, which will incarase tank dmg/armor

Poor descriptions of tanks

How you described tanks? "Big dmg/ AoE/ Slow Attack" And that`s all... Wow it`s really much!

 

[locast]

krisserz isn't a mod ^^

(For those who now try to scan the thread to find where he said he was a mod: He didn't say it here. I'm a mod and I saw the reason for why he reported. No, I'm not going to share that information with you )

and neither did i

The whole goal of the map is to stand close to the spawn of enemy units, and sometimes use skills (if you have bought any)Umm, well. I don`t remember at all, but it`s like 1k gold gives you a tank, which has 50 more damage, and the tank with ~200 dmg costs 12k (or smth like that)As I said... I was playin`, and it was goin` pretty good. Untill the wyrms had begun to spawn. After about 7 attacks I was dead, like other players I played with. The first enemies we were slaining without losing big amounts of HP, and that has changed immediately (too fast) with wyrms.The number of spells, which can be bought is (only) 4. And the tank can have 2 of them (when you buy 2 spells and than buy new tank you cannot buy even 1 of them, because it`s displaying a message, that you have already reached max number of spells)There are only poitions. There are no items, which will incarase tank dmg/armorHow you described tanks? "Big dmg/ AoE/ Slow Attack" And that`s all... Wow it`s really much!

most of those are pretty much fixed, balancing just hasnt arrived in my list yet.



i did posted it in the map development section and was TOLD to post here because it LOOKED like i was completed.

and rejecting without a reason is just totally wrong!
the stickies even said to fix what the mob says, and post in the blah blah section, how am i gotta do that without anything to fix