eubz;2497210 said:

I don't think arena type of map is only for 1 v 1. Can you add some more players for this map because it could be better?

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1. The map has only one player and that's player 1.

2. There are no triggered abilities. The abilities you use doesn't have fixed x-y button positions that is why they crumbled when all of the levels of other ability are consumed.

3. A player will be asking many things about what he will do because you did not even tell him how to play your map using Quest or texts.

4. Triggers? You are very lazy naming triggers. You just copy pasted the melee initialization for so many times. You got so many location leaks also.

5. The terrain needs more polishing.

I suggest you read the following:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/general-mapping-tutorials-278/
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/trigger-gui-editor-tutorials-279/

My vote is for rejection because you have a lot to tackle about this map

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Shadow Fury said:

This is just horrible! The terrain is awful, 4 heroes r not enough and why is the audience owned by player 1 and player 2? In addition, heroes start at level 8 and I can't understand why. Also, why should I w8 an eternity for the gate to disappear? I kept attacking the gate but it didn't lose 1 HP. WHY???? Restricted terrain, dull and non-original ablities, Raider's Ensnare ability description is "Tooltip missing". Very short description of the rest of the abilities. Gameplay lasts no more than a minute or two. I didn't even have a look at the rest of the heroes from such horror from the first time I tested.

WHAT I SUGGEST!!!!!!!:-
- Well, first u must make the map larger because so small it sucks! A map 32x32 or 64x64 is usually too small to be played in
- When u've started over again, I suggest u use Barrens tileset as it has a more gladiatorish look
- Add more gladiators, especially some orcs like Beastmaster, Blademaster, Tauren etc...
- Abilities MUST BE ORIGINAL! Taking the common Blizzard abilties like "Critical Strike", "War Stomp" without even renaming them is totally a terrible idea. Make abilities like "Fatal Strike", "Ground Slam", "Duplication", "Unbridled Rage", "Bloodthirst" and much more! These r interesting abilities!
- Use custom models, skins and icons! Using the common models is also a horrible idea as everyone has grown tired of seeing the dreary Raider, Archer, Paladin and Apprentice Wizard. Blizzard icons r even more boring than common models
- Well, what can I say again... Ah yes! Make gameplay longer! Maybe putting many rounds? Like Round 1, Round 2 and some unexpected events like Thunder Lizards coming down in hordes and dealing damage to the gladiators.
- Many game modes like Survival Mode where 1 or 2 players fight the creeps in the arena coming to kill them and if they kill them all, both players win! Another one is Boss Fight, where 1 or 2 players have to defeat one or more bosses (can be added to Survival Mode if u want).

For now, this map gets a dreadful 1/5 and so I surely vote for REJECTION!!!

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