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15:39, 31st Jul 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected
ap0calypse: Rejected
(2 ratings)
All the Credits are in the Trigger Area.
well, i didnt help on this movie xP
Camera : The camera work is not good at all, it should constantly move around and the cameras always had a bad view. Terrain : The terrain needs a lot of improvements, it doesn't look like a farm at all, you've used blizzard cliffs, there are doodads that do not even fit the environment. Story : The story is also not so interesting, you've used floating texts for the dialogues instead of Cinematic Transmissions, which looks bad and is hard to read. Then the dialogues, they're just terrible, you've also made a lot of typos etc. and it's confusing if those 2 men are brothers or one of them is a father. The story itself is boring, because a kid just asks his dad about his mother etc. Then comes a knight and tells them to go save the castle. It's also too short. Animations : You've used animations but they do not fit at all. I suggest you remove them. Other : There are several typos in the cinematic. Hiveworkshop : You have broken a few rules : The description is too short. You need to post the credits in the description. Overall : I would say this is far from complete and needs a lot of improvements. Work on it a lot more. Final Rating : 1/5 |