09:10, 30th May 2010
enjoy: You should stop making the dark outlines. You can define it probably, with shading and highlights. You can see some tutorials maybe on http://www.deviantart.com. Just search that site for something as, reality tutorial, or so. Then something should show you how to not define it with a black outline.

23:45, 09th May 2010
enjoy: okay.. make it like this http://static-p4.fotolia.com/jpg/00/12/23/65/400_F_12236543_tP8ryXwpahYawuh47kgJcvgPj8lwKcL4.jpg

Updated:

-Removed Black Lines

The round thing does not look like a scorpion.

Just a black ball with a black line coming out of it, i suggest looking at real scorpion tails to get some ideas.

Add some pointy sharp things on the black ball and you have a morning star, this needs to be reworked, though the idea is nice

3/5

Updated - maked shadows / highlights stronger

round is too big.
keep updating
3/5

a sorpion tail does not look like a ball with a needle i ve got a scorpion and its one body part it goes from big to small big part is short and small part becomes longer and lionger hope u can make it better cos itz a cool idea ^^ ( i like scorpons)

well i'm trying to make a version 2 then

Seems very cartoon-like, almost as if this should be in the next Warcraft: Pokemon conversion. Otherwise, the strange (but defiantly good) coloring and shape make this something almost off-limits to some things.. 4.5/5 Recommended

i had that idea too ,
Looks nice