IceCrown Citadel

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Vengeancekael: Private Message
Date: 2012/Mar/28 22:17:47

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Comment: Posted by another user: -Kobas-: (See post)

Terrain is more or less ok (Huge model but it's nice idea).
But story is horrible, I don't like to see Arthas or any other Blizzard character used in private maps.
Story has no sense and Arthas act like some 10 year old child.
Lightning effect you created are poor as well, they should be placed above ground not on it.
Add some more effects, replace characters, create some epic battle and it will be good enough for approval.

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[Bugz]

0/5.

Story:

Your Cinematic have no story at all.

Terrain:

A cinematic always include more camera's and most likely more then one terrain place, but what you made is acceptable but still not epic.

Camera:

This is the worst of it, the only triggers you made is clipping so bad...

Tip: Start writing a story, improve your skills and one day you have made a succesfull cinematic. For now, dont try.

 

[Sawcawarrr]

ok i know im bad

 

[Bugz]

It's not because you're "Bad", your skills just need to be worked on.
Keep working and you will proceed! Cinematics are the hardest thing to create, and it takes alot of time.

 

[0neM4n4rmy]

like he said. ur not bad. every1 started like this. u just need more experience in what you do and one day youll be a hardcore mega map maker!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Sawcawarrr]

tnx guys for support

 

[-Kobas-]

Really bad.

Terrain is more or less ok (Huge model but it's nice idea).
But story is horrible, I don't like to see Arthas or any other Blizzard character used in private maps.
Story has no sense and Arthas act like some 10 year old child.
Lightning effect you created are poor as well, they should be placed above ground not on it.
Add some more effects, replace characters, create some epic battle and it will be good enough for approval.