YellowProudmoore.blp

[Moderator]

10:40, 22nd Nov 2009
67chrome: The freehand portions are to messy, use smaller brushes with less feathering. The hair on the face really bothers me, it looks really nothing like hair. You should really check out some tutorials on how to draw hair, or pull up a picture of someone and try to draw the hair from that. I believe there are plenty of tutorials on how to draw hair in the 2D art tutorials section, and perhaps they could help you with finishing the rest of the skin as well

 

[Karaterat]

Is this the cheese man? oo and those knee caps, scared the crap out of me

 

[mnib]

hehe u can use it as what u want cheese guy cheese seller gold keeper or we

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

Eh... far too blurry. :l

 

[Dentothor]

you need to add a whole lot more detail to the skin. because all i see is just random blobs.
try reading the skinning rules on what is expected of a proper skin.
and read some tuts while your at it. They will really help you improve your skills to become a better artist.

 

[Misha]

recolor, not rly..
this is just a sloppy paint-up
i'd suggest you do much, much more edits, In this state, the skin is a goner.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/mr-goblins-tutorial-110127/
read this, it should help you by the thousands.

 

[Bernkastel]

What... Is.. This?

 

[AbstractCreativity]

What... Is.. This?

The cheese man, I thought they already explained that in previous comments?

Just kidding.

Yep, go read some tutorials, practice a lot, and eventually you'll end up a great skinner. Everyone can if they want to.
Well here's my advice for this skin:
-More shading / highlights.
-More interesting details. When someone's looking to replace their Admiral Proudmoore skin, I think they'd be looking for something elaborate, epic-looking, rather than the Yellow King of Yellow Cheese. :]
-Oh, and do fix his hair. You got a couple of black spots (well, rather cracks/fissures) inside the wrap area. And they're begging to be fixed.

 

[Absent]

Well, the idea is good (Proudmore in golden armor, if I am not mistaken), but the actual skin is... meh. I am not myself a skinner, but listen to everyone else and go read a couple tutorials. Get a bit of practice in and make the skin better.

 

[mnib]

i got question if i make like 2nd horn or smth to lets say arm part like the 1 that iis already will it show or ust do nothing cause i want to know if u can add things to skins

 

[darkdeathknight]

English, Do you speak it?

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

i got question if i make like 2nd horn or smth to lets say arm part like the 1 that iis already will it show or ust do nothing cause i want to know if u can add things to skins

No. You'd have to edit the actual model.

 

[mnib]

k ty for answer xD jsut wanted to know

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

You're welcome.

 

[takakenji]

Wat is this.

 

[Crazed_seal2]

Nananananana CHEESEMAN! CHEESEMAN! Nanananananana CHEESEMAN!
Ok serious wat is this otherwise i am puzzled. Try and discribe this monster and plz read sum tuts.