[W.i.P] my second icon vicius bite :S

[Kazzo]

so here's my second icon vicius bite i will use this in my map a passive ability that reduce's movement speed from targets here's the wip ideas for improve it will be nice i'm working on it !

 

[Sabelion]

Nice.But I wonder what creature is that?

 

[Kazzo]

Updated: add more changues to the icon^^
sabelion i think is a abomination or a flesh monster!! xD should i add blood to her tongue? :S

 

[TheHunterKiller]

The teeth is pretty good, but that skin looks really, really strange...

 

[Kazzo]

xDD i know i wanted some like a fleshing beast drinking or sucking (xD) blood ^^ if you have some ideas to improve it say it

 

[Destructor [DoR]]

Earthworm Jim in rampage mode

Lower the face so that you can add a nose or something else, atm you cannot see that it´s a face. It looks more like a mouth in the arm/body of some demon

 

[Kazzo]

i will try it but i wanna a mouth sucking blood no the face of a monster

 

[Sabelion]

Well, I think you need to change his lips abit. Those are the ones that makes it look a little..weird.

Maybe it whould be easier if you made it so you saw it from the front. Like not from the side (as it is right now).

 

[Kazzo]

y i will rework the lips but now i'm working on another icon too thank to for the comments anyways

 

[Sabelion]

Try make him facing the other way and turn him upside down so that the tongue goes down. I think it will make it look bttr and you wont have to do anything realy. bcuz I gues the program you use can do it 4 u.