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VoS - Valley of Secrets 0.0.1
Story Part I:
David: Hmm, this place smells like someone has rotten dead. I don’t like it. Something is going on in this graveyard.
Action: You hear some screams in the background so you turn around quickly to the direction it came from.
David: Shit something is defiantly out there, so I better get out of here quick.
Action: You head east away from the screams. But then you hear it again.
David: What the hell is going on here? I can still hear the terrifying screams in the dark.
Action: You take a few steps forward seeing a young girl getting devoured by monster.
Action: You stand still hoping that the monster does not see you.
Action: The monster turns its head and looks at you.
David: Oh no. It’s coming to get me.
Action: The monster turns away from you and runs away.
David: Oh thank god. I thought it was going to kill me.
Action: You take a few deep breaths after what has just happed.
Action: Then you hear a loud scream from the monster behind you.
David: Oh no please. Ahhhhhhhhhh!
Story Part II:
Action: The sun sets, as the hero walks out side of his house.
Hero: Ah, what a wonderful day.
Jake: Hey how’s it going there?
Hero: It’s going great Jake thank you.
Action: Then you smile.
Hero: There is going to be heaps of things for me to do today.
Action: The hero sighs.
Hero: I wonder when David is going to come home. It’s been almost a week since I’ve seen the bugger.
Action: You begin to take a 1 and a half hours walk to the direction Jake went last night.
Hero: Nothing like a good day’s work then going for a stroll. Hmm I wonder where David is.
Action: You begin to think of where he told you where he was going last night.
Hero:: Ohhhh, know where the bugger went. He wanted to go the cemetery to see his father’s grave. Poor bugger. I should have gone with him. He is probably sooking about it at the grave right now. Even tho 5 days away from town is a long time to be away from town.
Action: You see the graveyard in the distance.
Hero: Haha there it is. Hey, it’s getting pretty dark right now. And I can’t see anyone at the gravestone.
Action: Takes a closer look.
Hero: Oh wait. That is him right there. I should get him to come home now. He is probably ready to come home now. Jesus, this is like my 2nd time getting him from a situation like this.
Action: The hero hears a loud scream coming from the grave stone.
Hero: Whoa, what was that? It didn’t come from David, I know that for sure!
Action: You hear the loud scream again. You start to get freaked out. Then you shout.
Hero: David! Hey mate. What is with that screaming right? Haha... David?
Action: You walk into the cemetery. Then you see this thing behind a grave stone. Then it turns its head around to you.
Hero: Oh no, what do I do.
Action: You pick up a stick in the ground.
Hero: Come on! You freak of Nature.
Action: The monster heads towards you then takes a leap to kill you. Then the hero hits the monster with the stick in the head. The stick had a pointy end.
Hero: Thank god for that.
The hero begins to notice supernatural happenings around the village. So you begin to head south to stay away from the town. Hoping whatever is out there is not going to kill you. The hero finds a small camp with 2 people. The camp had supplies that could come handy to the hero. As you begin your quest to find out what is going on and why it is happening. You’ve got a long way to go. The end.
If spelling errors and grammar errors are detected. Please tell me where they are.
Note: This is just a small story I made up for my RPG. Valley of Secrets will not begin until I have finished by current project. Thank you.
Story Part I:
David: Hmm, this place smells like someone has rotten dead. I don’t like it. Something is going on in this graveyard.
Action: You hear some screams in the background so you turn around quickly to the direction it came from.
David: Shit something is defiantly out there, so I better get out of here quick.
Action: You head east away from the screams. But then you hear it again.
David: What the hell is going on here? I can still hear the terrifying screams in the dark.
Action: You take a few steps forward seeing a young girl getting devoured by monster.
Action: You stand still hoping that the monster does not see you.
Action: The monster turns its head and looks at you.
David: Oh no. It’s coming to get me.
Action: The monster turns away from you and runs away.
David: Oh thank god. I thought it was going to kill me.
Action: You take a few deep breaths after what has just happed.
Action: Then you hear a loud scream from the monster behind you.
David: Oh no please. Ahhhhhhhhhh!
Story Part II:
Action: The sun sets, as the hero walks out side of his house.
Hero: Ah, what a wonderful day.
Jake: Hey how’s it going there?
Hero: It’s going great Jake thank you.
Action: Then you smile.
Hero: There is going to be heaps of things for me to do today.
Action: The hero sighs.
Hero: I wonder when David is going to come home. It’s been almost a week since I’ve seen the bugger.
Action: You begin to take a 1 and a half hours walk to the direction Jake went last night.
Hero: Nothing like a good day’s work then going for a stroll. Hmm I wonder where David is.
Action: You begin to think of where he told you where he was going last night.
Hero:: Ohhhh, know where the bugger went. He wanted to go the cemetery to see his father’s grave. Poor bugger. I should have gone with him. He is probably sooking about it at the grave right now. Even tho 5 days away from town is a long time to be away from town.
Action: You see the graveyard in the distance.
Hero: Haha there it is. Hey, it’s getting pretty dark right now. And I can’t see anyone at the gravestone.
Action: Takes a closer look.
Hero: Oh wait. That is him right there. I should get him to come home now. He is probably ready to come home now. Jesus, this is like my 2nd time getting him from a situation like this.
Action: The hero hears a loud scream coming from the grave stone.
Hero: Whoa, what was that? It didn’t come from David, I know that for sure!
Action: You hear the loud scream again. You start to get freaked out. Then you shout.
Hero: David! Hey mate. What is with that screaming right? Haha... David?
Action: You walk into the cemetery. Then you see this thing behind a grave stone. Then it turns its head around to you.
Hero: Oh no, what do I do.
Action: You pick up a stick in the ground.
Hero: Come on! You freak of Nature.
Action: The monster heads towards you then takes a leap to kill you. Then the hero hits the monster with the stick in the head. The stick had a pointy end.
Hero: Thank god for that.
The hero begins to notice supernatural happenings around the village. So you begin to head south to stay away from the town. Hoping whatever is out there is not going to kill you. The hero finds a small camp with 2 people. The camp had supplies that could come handy to the hero. As you begin your quest to find out what is going on and why it is happening. You’ve got a long way to go. The end.
If spelling errors and grammar errors are detected. Please tell me where they are.
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