Undead Mansion

[wet_water]

No one knows me as a terrainer, but I'd like to start and say hello! I always look at this forum when I want to see some nice warcraft stuff, and now I've decided to get in on this stuff. Here's my first entry The Undead Mansion

 

[redmarine]

That is pretty sweet and cool. Perhaps I could get the map and make a fun game?

 

[wet_water]

Hmm I guess I could give it to you, I have no more use for it.

 

[MasterStryke]

little bit too many green, and in the first pic: blue sky and.. y the only blue thing^^

and else... hmm the stairs to the right are flying.. well the rocks are too light and dont get together with the rest

good: i like the halfdead tree, that want to fall asleep and the house looks good

i would improve the area complete^^

 

[Gilles]

This makes me think of ~Voids~ first piece.

It's pretty good. You used doodads well to make the building, and you did an okay job with the environment doodads. This biggest problem is how green it is. Makes me want to puke.

You could also work on backgrounds. Your terrain ends all of a sudden instead of continuing. Always make sure to add to the background for a better overall feel.

 

[wet_water]

Ok thks ill work on your points

Edit- Made more backround, fixed steps, fog

 

[Gilles]

Better, but the background still could look better. You would have to extend the map to fix this.

Still too green for me, but it's a lot better. If you like the feel leave it. The environment really takes away from the building. I don't like the whole pit thing.

 

[Drakosa123]

It looks nice

 

[Naze]

As Gilles said in his last post, the background could look better.

My hint is to resize a dead tree model (to smaller), and then cover the part after the hills with them.