Two terrain

[Vestras]

This is my first two terrains ever, so please, don't be mean ^_^

 

[Oziris]

Not bad but ther is a floating tree in picture 2 click Ctrl+page down that will help u!

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

Pretty nice for first works, but use more doodads to make the terrain more alive

 

[Nudl9]

1) Sunlight at night
2) Flying trees
3) Background is empty?
4) Blizzard trees at first screeny
5) Dont use "first terrain" as an excuse to get sympathy
6)

don't be mean ^_^

Duh its called constructive critism, face it.
7)

This is my first two terrains ever

So you just opened WE for the first time and made these screenies? hmm...
8) Unrealistic cliffs on second screenie
9) Second screenie seems slightly a bad random except for the road.

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

I'm glad you never commented my first terrain, Nudl9

 

[Vestras]

1) Sunlight at night
2) Flying trees
3) Background is empty?
4) Blizzard trees at first screeny
5) Dont use "first terrain" as an excuse to get sympathy
6) Duh its called constructive critism, face it.
7) So you just opened WE for the first time and made these screenies? hmm...
8) Unrealistic cliffs on second screenie
9) Second screenie seems slightly a bad random except for the road.

...

1 - It isn't night.
2 - I know, I realized when I posted
3 - no?
4 - So? Does it matter?
5 - I didn't, I just said it.
6 - Two ways of seing things in
7 - No
8 - You got eyes for detail, huh?
9 - well..

 

[DungeonM]

1) Sunlight at night
2) Flying trees
3) Background is empty?
4) Blizzard trees at first screeny
5) Dont use "first terrain" as an excuse to get sympathy
6) Duh its called constructive critism, face it.
7) So you just opened WE for the first time and made these screenies? hmm...
8) Unrealistic cliffs on second screenie
9) Second screenie seems slightly a bad random except for the road.

Please stop posting.

Please, just stop. I'd tell you why but I think it would be fruitless.

As for the terrain, looks nice for your first two. Maybe try a different angle that would show a bit more and try some custom trees which you can find in the Ultimate Terraining Map or in the models section on the site. Same with the second one, maybe change the camera angle so you can view the path, doing this would provide the picture with a better focal point.

 

[Celaquil]

Since almost everything is mentioned; Can trees grow on rock tiles? O.O (first pic)

 

[Nudl9]

1 - It isn't night.
2 - I know, I realized when I posted
3 - no?
4 - So? Does it matter?
5 - I didn't, I just said it.
6 - Two ways of seing things in
7 - No
8 - You got eyes for detail, huh?
9 - well..

1 - It is night, background sky is dark and the light in the terrain is dark, not light.
2 - Kay.
3 - I mean the background sky image is to close to camera, like it would be nice with some cliffs or trees in background, or atleast make a horizont line.
4 - It looks ugly and there are nicer palm tree models in UTM.
5 -

This is my first two terrains ever

6 - Skip
7 - Skip
8 - This should explain it...

9 - Make some eye candy and eye catching things.
Not just up and down cliffs, trees and rocks or shrubs and flowers.
Its boring, make a freaking huge stature or something to catch a bit of attention and make the terrain special.

Please stop posting.

Please, just stop. I'd tell you why but I think it would be fruitless.

Tell me why, yes plz.
And if it is so "fruitless" send by PM then.

 

[Gilles]

Nudl9, hills can be very smooth. Look at Ireland. Although those hills are ugly. It's the doodads and lack of tile variation, not so much how "unrealistic" they are.

 

[tunerband]

Oh my god to be first terrain i think it look great!

 

[Mechmap]

Not bad but ther is a floating tree in picture 2 click Ctrl+page down that will help u!

Oziris, I've actually never got what page is. Would you mind telling me what controll it is?

 

[Parkietje]

keys on your keyboard

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Looks pretty standard, in the average-good section.

 

[~Void~]

Nudl9, hills can be very smooth. Look at Ireland. Although those hills are ugly. It's the doodads and lack of tile variation, not so much how "unrealistic" they are.

They can be very smooth, but it doesn't really look good in warcraft.

 

[Gilles]

They can be very smooth, but it doesn't really look good in warcraft.

That's fairly true. They could look good, but these ones were too small. Smooth hills are usually rolling hills. Which have gradual slopes all over.

 

[Gladin]

Nudl, there does exist smooth hills like the second one. Infact, there are those there I live.
Criticism and being mean is 2 slightly different things.
.... and I don't think he said it was his first terrain to get sympathy.

 

[Nudl9]

.... and I don't think he said it was his first terrain to get sympathy.

It is and it also gives an impression that this work is bad, so people wont even bother looking at their thread.
So its even better to write "Pro terrain" then "first terrain" even though it may sound arrogant.

 

[Mechmap]

Thx so much Parkietje, finally I got one more terrain thing under controll. Now to figure out how that fog thing works... If I'm not to lazy...

 

[King.DeDeDe]

I looked at the first picture before I read they were your first two hah, good work! I really like the first picture, it's simple, but it came out really well. I'de suggest some more foliage, like vines or somthing =) The second picture has that floating tree haha, but besides that, not bad either. Keep working at it!