The Return of The BlackRock

[Moderator]

15:39, 7th Apr 2009 by bounty hunter2:
The map seems to be very low of quality, for more info see post #4, Rejected.

 

[Warhunter]

I will only apoint one thing. Battle with The Vilage isn't spelled right. you forgot one L.
it should be "Battle with The Village"

 

[crazzzytoo]

i am sorry obout that my english isnt that good i am from bulgaria i hope you liked the campaing

 

[Zelda.Alex]

The Return of the Black Rock
>Some description of the campaign at the custom campaign menu
>Change the campaign Screen
>"Battle of the village" not vilage

Chapter1
1.....Loading screen has typo
2.....In what time have you placed your campaign?
3.....The initial cinematic takes time before the starting of dialogue
4.....The main Quest says Cave North but it is South
5.....The pig farms do not give me any food. It is 19/0
6.....The mirror image is bad. I can easily tell which one is the image & which is my true hero
7.....No way to heal units. Only waiting. Not needed much
8.....The story is not clear
9.....MAJOR: Mazaru died but the game did not end. Maybe because of his mirror image.
10.....The guard tower does not attack
11......In the beginning the blademaster is at level2. Why not at level1
12......Near the cannon tower where did that small army came from?
13......The terrain is too simple. Fully plain & single path only
14......The second map does not start after the first map ends by itself. I can do that in the campaign menu but it should take place by itself.

My Rating : 1/5
Single path, lack of proper storyline, bad terrain, one major bug
The map is fit for rejection

Chapter2
1.....The camera angle is too odd.
2.....The cinematic cannot be skipped
3.....Typing mistakes
4.....I took a look at the terrain by using issedeadpeople. Greenery in the midst of ice? Plain terrain? Need much work

Seeing the quality of the first map & this map i do not think it will need more review till
an update.
Will you be working on this campaign or is it a test?

If you need help with terrain or anything with this map try to start a thread on http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/f256/

 

[Cyper95]

just get someone to fix that english of yours cinematic sux with loads of typo's like your other campaign Freedom Of Easteren Kingdom which actually got a typo in title

 

[crazzzytoo]

I am realy sorry obout all of the bugs and typing mistakes i am new to the Campaing makig this is my second but now i will fix evrything i am planing on doing something with Night elf so i will be expecting all of your comments i realy thank you for the time you spend and for the great comments and i will totaly take someone to fix my typing because i am not realy good i realy want to become good at this and your comments are healping me greatly!!!!!!

 

[Zelda.Alex]

Try fixing the first map firstly. Then go in Map Development - The Hive Workshop - A Warcraft III Modding Site & start a thread for the campaign there & post the map for testing. You uploaded 2 campaign at once which you should not have done. Whenever you start a map then go in the map development section before coming in the map section.