The peasant - Traps

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This is the second part of the 'The Peasant' - Adventure

Please tell me if you found any bugs
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I corrected the mistype

Keywords:
Peasant,Poor,Cave,Demon,Necromancer
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The peasant - Traps (Map)

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10:59, 28th Jun 2008 Septimus: Good Point [+] Good fire effect, I like how he break the ice. [+] Funny, especially the whisper voice. [+] The gate seem kinda retarded [+] Ask stupid question to pass the cave... lol.. Bad Point [-]...

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10:59, 28th Jun 2008
Septimus:

Good Point

[+] Good fire effect, I like how he break the ice.
[+] Funny, especially the whisper voice.
[+] The gate seem kinda retarded
[+] Ask stupid question to pass the cave... lol..

Bad Point

[-] Typo error detected, you had mistype it as tortue instead of torture.
[-] No music
[-] No sound effect

Overall - 3/5
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I want to give 5/5, but without music and sound effect is what turn me off.
 
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I'll give this a 4/5....
The terrain = wasn't that bad, it lacked a bit of detail...But I can see the art in ur work on it giving the environs a sense of uniqueness...I appreciate that 4/5....because it can still be improved by putting in more detail
The story = good story, I give it a 4/5.
The effects = Pretty basic, some were good, some bad..But I liked how u used them on the right time at the right place 3.5/5
Cheers!!
 
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This may contain spoilers

>>The same thing in the map description is placed.
>>It is that's instead of thats.
>>It should have been "I didn't knew" instead of "I don't know" after he had cast the spell
>>"go away" instead of "go awy" when he meets the necromancer again near the book shelf.
>>Necromancer says "I had to return". It should be "I have to return". Same goes for the peasant when he speaks "I had to go".
>>The peasant attacked the fire? What for?
>>No music & no sound effect again.
>>Suggested Players: Beliebig Take care of this.
>>See the image. The camera angle is bit too low. It makes the scene bad.
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=ixjoqa

My rating: 3/5. Try to update this. I will like to see this.
 

deepstrasz

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The necromancer didn't reanimate him and now the peasant has powers he didn't even know he had but knew he was able to conjure hidden magiks? He even cheated poisonous death and defeated the necromancer who wasn't sure if to help the peasant or not.
 
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