The End of VFR

[Moderator]

ap0: Rejected

13:15, 16th Jun 2008
Septimus:

-Cinematic very long.
-Most of the time rather had talking instead of action, making it kinda boring.
-Hardly any suspense at all.
-Seem to had spelling error, I do not mind grammar error. But, spelling error ?
-At the gate entrance to Shinn base, it seems like those infernal just stand still to let them hit
-1 of them mention "For Allah", is he a muslim ?
-At the fight Shinn, it seems like they just standing still and had an conversation only.

Overall - 2/5

Approve

 

[water_Knight]

Woot clan VFR for the win XD nice map valgalla

 

[Septimus]

-Cinematic very long.
-Most of the time rather had talking instead of action, making it kinda boring.
-Hardly any suspense at all.
-Seem to had spelling error, I do not mind grammar error. But, spelling error ?
-At the gate entrance to Shinn base, it seems like those infernal just stand still to let them hit
-1 of them mention "For Allah", is he a muslim ?
-At the fight Shinn, it seems like they just standing still and had an conversation only.

Overall - 2/5

Approve