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The Death Knight

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Well, I decided to write this story for a "Your character's backround" thread on some Oblivion forum, and, I must say I'm quite proud. It's different than my other stories with the fact that it's first person, and is basically just a retelling of a story by my character. This is a minor Warcraft cross-over with the fact that it features a blade similar in style to frostmourne so... yeah. I hope you enjoy it! (NOTE: Knowing basic lore/facts about Oblivion is advised before reading!)

It has been a short time since my arrival in Cyrodiil. I had come to seek my fortune and to start my life over again, after imprisonment for my 'crime'... if you could call stealing petty fruits and vegetables a CRIME...! Upon completing my long and arduous sentence, I was escorted to the Warden. He had given me simple rags to cover my nearly-bare and bony body and a bag of a few coins. He then pointed towards the door, and, I exited. Two guards escorted me out, and, upon exiting the Imperial City Prison, they plummeted me to the ground and spit on me. 'Pathetic whelp!', they said, mockingly... I grit my teeth with anger as I promised myself that ONE DAY... I would have my revenge...

That day came sooner than expected. A few days later, while I was wandering the forests of Southern Cyrodiil, I happened upon an encampment. I stumbled over to find a pot of stew roasting over an open fire. 'Food!', I said excitedly as I reached for the ladle. But before I could gulp it down, a blade slithered across my neck. I looked up to find bandits staring me in the face with angry, hurtful eyes. They were going to try and steal whatever gold the Warden had issued me... 'No!' I shouted. 'I have HAD it with the abuse. No longer shall I sit and hide in the shadows and be mugged and tortured!' I elbowed one of the bandits and grabbed his sword, and the a fight to the death ensued. Each strike they made at me I parried and counterattacked, killing them one by one...

Rising from the bloodstained ground, I tossed the blade to the ground. I looked up the sky and let loose a howl that would scare even the strongest Daedra Lord! It pierced those within earshot, and the nearby animals had fled in fear. At that moment, I saw where my destiny lay. In the distance, up a tall hill, stood an ancient doorway to a large cavern. I walked towards it, and slowly, I began to notice a change in the weather. Everything suddenly grew colder...

The door was frozen. Every part was covered with ice. I touched it gently and trembled in the cold... And it all went black.

After what seemed like an eternity later I awoke, and before me rested a mighty helm and blade. They... called to me. They asked me to hold them. To bear them... and so I did. I placed the helm on my head gripped the sword with both hands. And then... I changed. My skin began to pale, my eyes began to glow, and the cold... the cold felt... good. I was no longer some wandering peasant. I was no longer some weakling that would suffer beneath the feet of others. I am the Death Knight, and my will... shall be DONE!


I hope you enjoyed it. As with any other story I write (or type) I ask that you review and share your personal interests and nitpicks you have.
 
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This story owns ^^ you could actualy use this as an intro for a campagin or something. :p
It's realy good and I can see why you are proud of it!
Could you continue this Death Knight's story? I would love him to kill and torture people that gave him a hard life. ^^

Anyway, it's a very good story and I like it. =:D

Btw, I think you had a typo at: and the a fight to the death ensued. (It's at the part where he fights the bandits.)
 
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I rarely post stories anymore. But I usually reply to other posts around here, and in the Off-topic forum or Map Development/Idea Factory. Most of my threads are very old but... why exactly are you asking?
 
I rarely post stories anymore. But I usually reply to other posts around here, and in the Off-topic forum or Map Development/Idea Factory. Most of my threads are very old but... why exactly are you asking?

Maybe because it is almost impossible to have so low rank and so much posts :)
As you can see I have only 143 posts and my rank is double to yours :) But who cares . These ranks are just made for fun and they can be earned very fast if you post some stuff for ppl like I do sometimes :)

Anyway your story is very good . I hope you will be writing more of these kind :)
 
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maybe Because It Is Almost Impossible To Have So Low Rank And So Much Posts :)
As You Can See I Have Only 143 Posts And My Rank Is Double To Yours :) But Who Cares . These Ranks Are Just Made For Fun And They Can Be Earned Very Fast If You Post Some Stuff For Ppl Like I Do Sometimes :)

Anyway Your Story Is Very Good . I Hope You Will Be Writing More Of These Kind :)

R(ank)ep?
 
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Haha, this actually reminds me more of an Elder Scrolls III: Morrowind story than an Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion...

At least the part at the beginning about the "crimes" he committed and what not. I should probably post some of my writings sometime.

Very nice job :D
 
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