[Cinematic] The 4 Warriors Conquest: Rise of the Death Introduction 1

[Fang]

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(Sorry for my bad english)

--- The Start of Darkness ---
A planet named Dissidia is a peaceful planet with incredible beauty. But, it all ended when the jealousy to others possessed the mind of a man named Gracazoras. Now, his mind is full of vengeance and hatred, thinking thathe will kill the man who stole the love from his wife.

He killed the man and Gracazoras' wife with no mercy! After that he didn't stop! He stood back to the Citadel of Veraith, thinking about what happened to the man and to his wife . He then go back to his house to eat, while eating, he saw soldiers with lots of women with them. As a result, his anger and hatred grew up.

The next day, he felt something. "What is that!?" he said. "It's darkness" he added.. His mind is full of Darkness, he felt stronger, he thinks in order to gain his power and his REPUTATION. He have to kill all of his family, friends, neighbours. So, he do it with no mercy! He caught by King Haragron's soldiers and put him in Dungeon making Gracazoras' Vengeance is growing and not stop growing.

The Next Day, the day of Gracazoras' execution awaits him. Then, a soldiers came and told Gracazoras to go with them to the execution court...

But, the execution has failed cause Gracazoras accidentally release his dark power and all people in the execution court are died! Gracazoras were really surprised. Is it the dark power that really strong and unbeatable? Then he go to where Haragron dies... And wear the Crown, he raised the corpses from the ancient time and then he reclaim himself as the Undead King!!!

 

[Moy]

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I've corrected some of the parts not the whole story :3. I hope I'd helped 'ya. I think there's still errors, I'm lazy to correct it correctly (redundancy)

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A planet named Dissidia is a peaceful planet with incredible beauty. But, it all ended when the jealousy to others possessed the mind of a man named Gracazoras. Now, his mind is full of vengeance and hatred, thinking thathe will kill the man who stole the love from his wife. He killed the man and his wife with no mercy! After that he didn't stop! He stood back to the Citadel of Veraith, thinking about what happened to the man and to his wife . He then go back to his house to eat, while eating, he saw soldiers with lots of women with them. As a result, his anger and hatred grew up. The next day, he felt something. "What is that!?" he said. "It's darkness" he added.