Silent Village

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14:55, 24th Jan 2011
-Kobas-:
Map Status: Rejected
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[-Kobas-]

Map can't be approved as melee because you missed few things:
1st. Item drops must be fixed (example only 1 creep near starting location drop item, to make it worse - Artifact)

2nd. Map isn't symmetric, if we look at blue player he will be able to defent from ground attack easily, he can destroy trees between 2 closest gold mines and make strong base there, more harder for red to do so, impossible for teal! Also teal is connected to them both, but read and blue don't...

3th. Terrain is average, but it must be improved, add more doodads, use rise and lower tool more! Tiles could be improved as well!

 

[UuiX25]

Map can't be approved as melee because you missed few things:
1st. Item drops must be fixed (example only 1 creep near starting location drop item, to make it worse - Artifact)

2nd. Map isn't symmetric, if we look at blue player he will be able to defent from ground attack easily, he can destroy trees between 2 closest gold mines and make strong base there, more harder for red to do so, impossible for teal! Also teal is connected to them both, but read and blue don't...

3th. Terrain is average, but it must be improved, add more doodads, use rise and lower tool more! Tiles could be improved as well!

1st. yea i going to fix not artifact for start location thx lot

2nd. well blue one impossible defend well base but i dont idea, well true kind little impossible teal and red unshare atk gold, yea blue tying ignore 1, gold mines mountian but ai do not that

3rd.Terrain well good enough, you want add more path blocker and tree too,
that enough rise hill and low hill no more, well good enough

Well thank comment for that even my brain getting hurt
second made kind little hard understand that

 

[light bolt30]

You might want to make some trees a bit round so it looks more natural. Some trees are straight and doesn't look natural but if you made them a bit round it will.

 

[UuiX25]

You might want to make some trees a bit round so it looks more natural. Some trees are straight and doesn't look natural but if you made them a bit round it will.

What you mean natural trees of round? Anything i got mistake the trees?

 

[light bolt30]

If you look at the trees top right of the red starting position in the screenshot, its a bit straight on the sides, you might want to make it look more natural like the trees at top left. But this is just my opinion.

 

[Eldubs]

Trees are ok, fix what kobas told you to fix and he will aprove your map : )

 

[-Kobas-]

Here you go example how trees and terrain can look like after 5 min of work!

Click

Click

 

[-Kobas-]

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Silent Village
Created by UuiX25 ; Uploaded by: UuiX25

Review

I explained already what's wrong with map:

1st. Item drops must be fixed (example only 1 creep near starting location drop item, to make it worse - Artifact)

2nd. Map isn't symmetric, if we look at blue player he will be able to defent from ground attack easily, he can destroy trees between 2 closest gold mines and make strong base there, more harder for red to do so, impossible for teal! Also teal is connected to them both, but read and blue don't...

3th. Terrain is average, but it must be improved, add more doodads, use rise and lower tool more! Tiles could be improved as well!

but map wasn't fixed ↓
Uploaded:03:47, 15th Jan 2011
Last Updated:03:47, 15th Jan 2011

Please if you decide to improve map just update this one and send message to us, we will unlock thread for you once again!
Map status: Rejected

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