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Shandris.blp

Submitted by CloudWolf
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
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This is my first ever skin so be kind :)

It's all freehand, except for the face which is the default skin with a mask I made.

Keywords:
Shandris, Archer, Ranger, Hunter, Elf, Night Elf, elven, bow, arrow
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Armoured Ranger (Texture)

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14:15, 29th Apr 2009 Dan van Ohllus: This skin has lots of great potential. Lot's of good freehand and stuffs. I especially like the cape and the wooden bow. It's enough for me to approve it, but you're still free to keep on updating.
  1. 14:15, 29th Apr 2009
    Dan van Ohllus:
    This skin has lots of great potential. Lot's of good freehand and stuffs. I especially like the cape and the wooden bow.
    It's enough for me to approve it, but you're still free to keep on updating.
     
  2. Misha

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    I smell filters here :D

    you could do a lill more freehand to it. because it looks nice.

    Did you used any CnP oO
     
  3. CloudWolf

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    lol yea :) I used a colour filter for the face, and a texture on the leather :( I'm not quite ready to make a face from scratch yet though ;)

    you'll have to excuse me, im new to the resource making world. What's CnP again? lol :)
     
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    copy and paste; means that you took other images and placed either the whole thing or parts of it into your skin/drawing
     
  5. CloudWolf

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    aaah :) Nope! I'll admit, a lot of the edges are messy so I can see why someone would think that xD thats probably due to the fact I drew over the original one :D

    I'll attempt to tidy that up a bit :)
     
  6. Misha

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    Change her face color to more pink-ish
    looks like she has that.. umm.. yellow-fever? oO

    and also give her some details on face. maybe a subtle scar or a subtle tattoo

    Cape and brown parts of the bow (if not whole bow) need shadows and highlights, as well as more detailing. (wood circles would be nice for bow) And certainly make folds on cape more showy.

    ~Misha~
     
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    Righto :D I just made some changes :p

    The skin is now more redish/pinkish, The cape has more darker and lighter areas, tatoo on the face ;) and finally, more detail on the bow :D

    Its only a minor improvement, but I'll try my best to keep on makign it better :p
     
  8. Misha

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    i would suggest you multiple angles on a screenshot as we can't see the tattoo on face.

    and the treelines on a bow could use some more showyness x3

    Tattoo on the face looks horrible and it should be waay smaller and somewhere on the cheek. this way it just wraps the neck, horribly that is.

    and too.... the tattoo needs to show a bit of the face texturing underneath as well 8)

    EDIT: Honestly.... she would need more bare-skin\subtle-tattoo area. give her that on her thighs and arms. and certaily change tattoo color to a somewhat purple. it fits better.

    oh yes, the tattoos should be more like lines and curves 8)
     
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    phew xD Im gonna go look at a few tutorials lol :)

    ty for the review! :)
     
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    Ok no...there's def no CnP, I can see that's all freehand...damn CnP Detecting noobs...:p
    Anyways, change the face....blah, stands out from the rest of the skin really badly
    Nice job so far though, let's see more!
     
  11. Misha

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    Exactly :D the face and bare arms/legs should have tiny purple-ish lightning bolt-ish tattoos (just my suggestion on shape) and they should be thinn and detailed, not fat =S
     
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    ok! A few more updates :) Instead of that nasty looking tatoo, I decided to go for a mask :p It kinda resembles the archer from warcraft 2 :)

    I also removed the textured leather, and did some freehand instead :)

    EDIT: Forgot to mention that I changed the wood on the bow also :)
     
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    Now it's most certainly better ^.^

    One thing you could do is to take that yellow... emblem? oO that's on shoulder armor and incorporate it into a cape.. and the skin is pretty much done.

    Good job :smile:
     
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    Wow! It really looks like Ranger in WC2! 5/5
     
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    Looks much better, dude^^
    the leather looks MUCH better now, before the update it looked a little bit like something burned.
     
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    Really good skin we have here! Keep practicing, I can't wait for moar skins from you. And to encourage you, here some +rep.
     
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    This is awesome, You got Talent!!!
    5/5
    Keep it up :thumbs_up:
     
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    It looks really good, Great work!
     
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    wow, i didnt think that this are possible. Your good with skins and a exellent terrainer. You has a lot of potential. I think you can be a good icon maker.
    Btw, This is skin are really good, but, you need to add more details to her hood, that looks really 'empty' ingame. Maybe do that outline more thick. Congratulations for arrive to the world of the resources makers! :D