Shandris.blp

[Moderator]

14:15, 29th Apr 2009
Dan van Ohllus:
This skin has lots of great potential. Lot's of good freehand and stuffs. I especially like the cape and the wooden bow.
It's enough for me to approve it, but you're still free to keep on updating.

 

[Misha]

I smell filters here

you could do a lill more freehand to it. because it looks nice.

Did you used any CnP oO

 

[CloudWolf]

lol yea I used a colour filter for the face, and a texture on the leather I'm not quite ready to make a face from scratch yet though

you'll have to excuse me, im new to the resource making world. What's CnP again? lol

 

[Thorneon]

copy and paste; means that you took other images and placed either the whole thing or parts of it into your skin/drawing

 

[CloudWolf]

aaah Nope! I'll admit, a lot of the edges are messy so I can see why someone would think that xD thats probably due to the fact I drew over the original one

I'll attempt to tidy that up a bit

 

[Misha]

Change her face color to more pink-ish
looks like she has that.. umm.. yellow-fever? oO

and also give her some details on face. maybe a subtle scar or a subtle tattoo

Cape and brown parts of the bow (if not whole bow) need shadows and highlights, as well as more detailing. (wood circles would be nice for bow) And certainly make folds on cape more showy.

~Misha~

 

[CloudWolf]

Righto I just made some changes

The skin is now more redish/pinkish, The cape has more darker and lighter areas, tatoo on the face and finally, more detail on the bow

Its only a minor improvement, but I'll try my best to keep on makign it better

 

[Misha]

i would suggest you multiple angles on a screenshot as we can't see the tattoo on face.

and the treelines on a bow could use some more showyness x3

Tattoo on the face looks horrible and it should be waay smaller and somewhere on the cheek. this way it just wraps the neck, horribly that is.

and too.... the tattoo needs to show a bit of the face texturing underneath as well 8)

EDIT: Honestly.... she would need more bare-skin\subtle-tattoo area. give her that on her thighs and arms. and certaily change tattoo color to a somewhat purple. it fits better.

oh yes, the tattoos should be more like lines and curves 8)

 

[CloudWolf]

phew xD Im gonna go look at a few tutorials lol

ty for the review!

 

[THE_END]

Ok no...there's def no CnP, I can see that's all freehand...damn CnP Detecting noobs...
Anyways, change the face....blah, stands out from the rest of the skin really badly
Nice job so far though, let's see more!

 

[Misha]

Ok no...there's def no CnP, I can see that's all freehand...damn CnP Detecting noobs...
Anyways, change the face....blah, stands out from the rest of the skin really badly
Nice job so far though, let's see more!

Exactly the face and bare arms/legs should have tiny purple-ish lightning bolt-ish tattoos (just my suggestion on shape) and they should be thinn and detailed, not fat =S

 

[CloudWolf]

ok! A few more updates Instead of that nasty looking tatoo, I decided to go for a mask It kinda resembles the archer from warcraft 2

I also removed the textured leather, and did some freehand instead

EDIT: Forgot to mention that I changed the wood on the bow also

 

[Misha]

Now it's most certainly better ^.^

One thing you could do is to take that yellow... emblem? oO that's on shoulder armor and incorporate it into a cape.. and the skin is pretty much done.

Good job

 

[AIagremm]

Wow! It really looks like Ranger in WC2! 5/5

 

[GAniksdal]

Looks much better, dude^^
the leather looks MUCH better now, before the update it looked a little bit like something burned.

 

[Leeroy]

Really good skin we have here! Keep practicing, I can't wait for moar skins from you. And to encourage you, here some +rep.

 

[Gyrosphinx]

This is awesome, You got Talent!!!
5/5
Keep it up

 

[Alfred]

It looks really good, Great work!

 

[Xezko]

wow, i didnt think that this are possible. Your good with skins and a exellent terrainer. You has a lot of potential. I think you can be a good icon maker.
Btw, This is skin are really good, but, you need to add more details to her hood, that looks really 'empty' ingame. Maybe do that outline more thick. Congratulations for arrive to the world of the resources makers!

 

[CloudMax]

CW!!! Your skilled in 2D art mate
Keep it up! Why dont you try to skin the heros D3W yourself? xP
Or maybe request a new witch doctor Model that actually looks like the one in diablo 3 xD

 

[CloudWolf]

That sounds like an amazing idea! about the witchdoctor that is I'll post something in the resource section

I would do them myself, but I'm not really good enough yet If I did, all the characters would end up looking all cartoonish xD

 

[Misha]

Practice maked perfect my friend

 

[TheGodOfIron]

Simple but great looking skin. For that, I'll give you a jewel.

 

[CloudMax]

That sounds like an amazing idea! about the witchdoctor that is I'll post something in the resource section

I would do them myself, but I'm not really good enough yet If I did, all the characters would end up looking all cartoonish xD

The barbarian already looks cartoonish for me, hes skin doesnt look real, looks like a plastic figure or something.
But you can still make your own custom icons? Since we will need specefic icons for every equipment slot and that would require some searching or you can just do fiting icons

 

[CloudWolf]

Just updated the skin again!

I redid the lower leg, and added some buckles!

 

[dickxunder]

1st skin? Looks good. You did this so nicely in fact that I will instead be looking for flaws.

The metallic pieces can be improved or restored?. You started the metal to be non-glossy, I guess that's how it should stay because adding gloss in a certain way can make it look like gray plastic.

I see you're trying to turn it to glossy-metal... I'm sorry but for this skin, my vote is for it to remain having non-glossy metals.

 

[CloudWolf]

ty for the review I'll see what I can do

 

[Misha]

concentrate on other skins, this one is aproved

 

[Malcous]

looks cool 4/5

 

[FrIkY]

Looks great for a first skin! ^^

 

[Tha_Wc3_Map_Maker]

srry to say it but the pads on the legs looks like the armor on the wolf on Chaos Wolf Rider.

But im not sure

 

[CloudWolf]

srry to say it but the pads on the legs looks like the armor on the wolf on Chaos Wolf Rider.

But im not sure

lol I can see what you mean, the colour scheme is quite similar I guaruntee that this skin is 100% freehand and nothing has been copy/pasted

 

[CloudMax]

Okey, i have been wondering this quite a while now and... how can the ears go through the cape? It looks cool but how the hell did she do it? xD Two holes in all NE capes? xP

CW, you should open a skinning factory. (cus i want you to make skins for me, lol) xD

 

[Spartipilo]

HI! ¡Is there a way to remove the glowing spots?

 

[CloudWolf]

Hmm... probably not through skins alone, unless you wanted to do it for every unit in the map xD

If you want a version of the shandris model without the glow, I'd totally recommend posting a request in the Requests Forum

Hope this helps!

 

[Superfrycook]

It's also work for Sylvanas.