"Shadow" The Poem

[Jsprat100]

My shadow stalks me throughout the world,
Why, oh shadow, must you be so cruel,
Relentless witter, tatter and ramble,
Yelling, Shrieking, hollering, shamble,

My shadow fears the simplest of things,
The sun, for one, the sky, for two,
Shadow, oh shadow, can't you go away,
Let me again see the peaceful light of day,

Leave! Dear Shadow! Once my friend,
Now a nuicance, a pest, a rodent,
Tell me, oh shadow, why you follow me so,
Why must your weight be ever towed?

By Jsprat100


It's far too depressing writing poetry. Then again, I am a depressing kind of person. Anyway, this can be interpreted in two ways: First, a litteral shadow, Second, an unwanted follower

 

[mjllonir]

Good, This is the best out of all the ones you wrote up to now in my opinion. I like how you have that double message in it as well. Poems are meant to let your mind roam free, to let words express how you feel and a way to show it to the world. Keep writing, even if you are a depressing person it is usually the thing that will let you keep going in life, as for others it may be singing or playing an instrument.

On another note, good job on getting the girl back. I have way too much respect for girls, so please don't hurt her (emotionally)

 

[Jsprat100]

I would never hurt her emotionally. I would be sad if we lost touch. She is the only person who can break my icy personality.

 

[klishky]

Brill!
Cant stand people like that

 

[Jsprat100]

Calm yourself down, It is meant to be a poem, not a shouting competition.

 

[klishky]

Calm yourself down, It is meant to be a poem, not a shouting competition.

I enjoy shouting competitions though!

 

[ShadowDemonLord]

Again another new person to the hive. Dude, seriously calm down... That stuffs annoying. And most likely would get you banned from this forum if you do to much of it.