Scorpion

[Koeky]

an other terrain made by me
hope you like it.

all critism is welcome

 

[Dr. House]

doesnt look very intresting to me and why is it named scorpion?

 

[Koeky]

doesnt look very intresting to me and why is it named scorpion?

there is a scorpion in the back, maybe it kinda hard to see it.

 

[Dr. House]

ok you can say im blind cause i really dont see one

 

[Celaquil]

I see it, and this would be your best terrain yet, though it doesn't look all too interesting it have a very realistic cave feel to it, you might want to make a "center of focus" though.

P.S: Some of the rocks seems like their floating, if they are; I would suggest you either delete them or make them a part of the walls, in a natural manner, of course.

 

[Dr. House]

keiji im blind so show me where the scorpion is plz

 

[Celaquil]

..>.>

 

[Koeky]

I see it, and this would be your best terrain yet, though it doesn't look all too interesting it have a very realistic cave feel to it, you might want to make a "center of focus" though.

well i could make an open part in the cave with a little campfire .

 

[Revolve]

Heres what I think;

The stones look rather plain a and boring, add some grass, props anything, needs other colors than grey. I think it looks rather good otherwise, lacks a real focus pointand the scorpion is barely seen, but definently okay. Keep it up.

 

[Koeky]

it's to be suppost to be underground, as far as i know there doesn't grow grass underground. but i could ad some roots.

 

[Dr. House]

i already thought it whas ther keiji but the problem whas i dont see that as a scorpion at all it just looks like somthing else but i dont know what (or like i sayed im just very much blind)

 

[Craka_J]

Throw some vegetation into this cave/cliff! Grass tufts and even trees sprouting from the rocks will make this terrain look more than just a pile of rocks with some water.

 

[Insincerity]

It looks half done. You should add something to it, like maybe make it an underground ruined city with staircases, bridges, lanterns and houses built into the rock walls. Actually, as I picture that in my head, I'm imagining how fucking amazing that would be.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

i see it =D

and ya all you need is some nice fog, and a better placement of those rocks and you could have a nice cave.

 

[Lexandritte]

Name doesn't quite fit the content, is not for Kejii, I would never see that scorpion....

Water-and-rocks constraction doesn't seem to have any flaws, but just this is not enough, it would be much better if the picture took a larger view of waterfall and surroundings, and forget about scorpion.

 

[Koeky]

It looks half done. You should add something to it, like maybe make it an underground ruined city with staircases, bridges, lanterns and houses built into the rock walls. Actually, as I picture that in my head, I'm imagining how fucking amazing that would be.

mh like that idea, maybe i will do that

 

[Azeroc]

I know! Add some cave crystals, it would look pretty cool then.

 

[FibSaSk]

hmmm it can be more interesting and make the scorpion easier to see