Saw V 1.1

[Moderator]

09:20, 28th Jun 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected

 

[Slayer14]

Got a few comments about this:

1. Are you the author of this map? If not, this map will be rejected for breaking a rule that's frequently broke on the Hive, "Maps must be significantly worked on, or entirely created, by their submitter."
2. Your description here isn't very, descriptive. It needs to tell us things like how to play, what to do, what's on it, who's the enemy, etc. You know, to give us a reason to even download this map.
3. The loading screen doesn't say anything about the map. It would be nice if it did.
4. Personally, I don't like the completely, 100% blank loading screen with no loading bar. It would be nice if there were a progress meter there like there usually is.
5. It would also be really nice if the Quest Log told you something about the map. Yes, I know there is an opening cinematic that tells you what's going on, but it's always nice to have some sort of "Mission Briefing" to refer to.
   
6. What's the deal with the 99 green keys and if you pick the wrong one, a trap activates? How in the world am I supposed to pick the right one?!
7. Surprise, surprise. I picked the wrong key when I played this map. As a result, I died. That was it. Game over. No defeat condition either.

I give this a [highlight]1/5[/code].

 

[NRS]

@slayer14 the right key's name is different.
i am just so lazy to add defeat condition.
when you only see the map's first part why rating to 1 ?

 

[Adr]

to complete this map is needed so much logic and the mine part is really hard !
also a like models and ideas .)
Great map 5/5

 

[Slayer14]

@slayer14 the right key's name is different.
i am just so lazy to add defeat condition.
when you only see the map's first part why rating to 1 ?

There's actually another part? I had no idea, but that wouldn't even be a problem if you explained all of that in the map's description.

 

[NRS]

There's actually another part? I had no idea, but that wouldn't even be a problem if you explained all of that in the map's description.

okay.
i try to create a normal description.
i think i need to work more on this map.
your maps aren't look bad , actually... your maps are perfect.