Satyr3.blp

[Moderator]

15:35, 25th Feb 2010
CloudWolf: This skin made me chuckle a bit It's a pretty original idea, however, it definately needs some updates

At present, the feathered areas are a tad monotone. This makes them appear almost solid orange in game. I'd recommend shading each feather a bit more where they overlap. That way they will be better defined

In terms of detail its pretty good, it just needs some more shading done to it to help the feathers stand out I'll leave it as pending for the moment, and give you a chance to update it before I give it a rating

Dentothor: No changes made. Rejected until updated.

 

[SlayerII]

if i did somehting wrong at uploadiong please tell me.
Give credits if you use

 

[Draknyte1]

looks cool ^_^

 

[SlayerII]

Really? then it was a good idea to make every feather by its own

 

[RaidonGod]

hum! this looks like a mutated chicken-monster-thingy! ô.Ô
needs improvement:
-shadings/highlights
-make the feather like eaglefeathers or w.e. not like a cartoon chicken!
It is a good start, but please improve it.

 

[SlayerII]

needs improvement:
-shadings/highlights

yea.. i know... i try to improve...

-make the feather like eaglefeathers or w.e. not like a cartoon chicken!

its supposed to like a paradise chikeneagle feathers do not fit i think...

 

[Draknyte1]

just call it bigbird, and then you can keep the yellow feathers
but it needs abit of shading, but otherwise its cool

 

[Hawk]

Ahhh Chickens! Little shading...anyway nice idea.

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

AHHHH! MY EYES!

Seriously though, you should take a look at feathered skins in the Warcraft III directory (I think the hippogryph is a great example). You'll see that the feathers are very, very defined. This is so that they will actually appear on the model's unwrap. So overall, this skin needs more definition, and it needs to seriously be toned down.

 

[SlayerII]

thanks for comments i will update it as soon i have time.

 

[Kimbo]

Here some tips:
Study beaks and bird face anatomy:
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2396/2165047562_01c8781b27.jpg
http://www.pxleyes.com/images/contests/bird%20face/fullsize/bird%20face_4b08c5db6979e_hires.jpg
http://homepage.mac.com/wildlifeweb/bird/bald_eagle/bald_eagle_03tk.jpg

Take a look at these feathers and mimic the patterns but make them
yellow, atm yours look like scales o.0:

Change his feet to claws, it still has hooves

Try to avoid looking for such a bright gold look, add a tint of blue and green to make it more natural.

 

[SlayerII]

his is not supposed to have claws and a bird face. maybe i change the hooves cause they really do not fit.
hmm nice feather picture, i may use it.

 

[-Kobas-]

I am currently working on something ))))) i can see it now!

Btw skin is good, but it needs shading, look at satyr near yellow dude!

 

[SlayerII]

im changed some thing and suddenly it looks this way...

 

[-Kobas-]

im changed some thing and suddenly it looks this way...

You deleted Alfa Channels
Maybe

 

[SlayerII]

i did not touch them at all....

 

[-Kobas-]

i did not touch them at all....

Y but sometimes when you change file format they gets destroyed,
same if you convert from tga to blp and use large compression lvl!

I try to add console texture into my last project, with cool blood details but only 4 main textures are about 3,5 MB, I convert them to blp with 85 (I try 60 it destroy channel) compression level and with all other they are still larger than 1 MB, so I quit that work

I don't know dude, i really want to help but I'm poor with 2D art

 

[Misha]

This eye-poking yellow will have to be toned down a LOT

 

[yakonshus]

im changed some thing and suddenly it looks this way...

It looks like you have turned the hole model into alfa channel.. i've never had that problem.

good idea but it is hard to see what it is..

 

[TheGodOfIron]

Looks like a joke. Serious.
Needs more definition >_<

 

[SlayerII]

thats not a joke thats called creativity. But till i found out wy its isnt working anymore i cant change it like i would like to

 

[War_Golum]

need more shadows mainly on the arms

 

[Tamerlaine]

needs shading

 

[Illidan_Hunter]

This is the first yellow monkey I've ever seen!

 

[Alfagar]

Lulz, he looks more like lion man in-game

 

[Tamerleine]

looks cartoonish.....

needs shading