SatanicBerzerker_v1.blp

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
The first skin I made

I tried to turn the paladin into a fanatic satanist
everything expect by the book and the hammer handle are drawn (the handle is without TC and the book is recoloured)

UPDATE: better texture and TC
UPDATE²: Tried to add shading

Keywords:
Satanic, Demon, Paladin, Unholy
Contents

Satanic Berserker (Texture)

Reviews
17:17, 11th Jan 2010 67chrome: It's a start, most of my skins look like this at some time, but usually in the first few minutes I work on them. You need to put at least five times the effort into this skin you already have put into it for it to...

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17:17, 11th Jan 2010
67chrome: It's a start, most of my skins look like this at some time, but usually in the first few minutes I work on them. You need to put at least five times the effort into this skin you already have put into it for it to stand a chance for approval though.

13:04, 19th Mar 2010
67chrome: The arms look good, the blood on the hammer is convincing enough, but the bulk of the skin (the robe) still needs to be worked on a lot more. Shade each crease and highlight each fold, right now it is horribly flat. The feet need shading to.
 
Also, you should give it some texture!
Might sound ironic, but you know.. those arms look smooth as a baby's butt, and i've never seen cloth that smooth either.
Add some grit to the clothes, and some hair or whwatever kind of detail you can come up with for those arms (just not blood and shit). Maybe some folds/cracks in the skin.
 
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Oh, and the blood on the hammer is so damn stereo. Do an upside-down Cross (Or an upside-down pentagram for that matter) or something a bit more creative. Just a tip.
 
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Ah right, another thing: The pentagram on the book is supposed to be upside-down (well, if it's supposed to be a satan related pentagram, which is pretty obvious i guess. The pentagram that's currently drawn on the book is a celtic symbol). I know i'm being annoying... >_<
 
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Hmm.... Unsure.... Model with diff anims, the before said improvements and if an model, the hammer is a little off though if it must be a hammer, recoloring would be adviced... My point of view in that form anyway...
 
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have you heard of shading?

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I think that the cloth is actually nice, for something without shading, but the feet and hand is bullpoop. I suggest not submitting a skin like this until asking other people about it.
 
Not very detailed, although the spell animation I though was pretty good.
W'sup with his feet? I like this model, but it needs a bit more detail and shades. I say 3/5.
It's a skin. people.
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...what?
 
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Uh... event... then condition... then event? What is this i don't even
and you named your trigger the event, good job
 
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Boo(cause im a christian) and also because well it needs more work needs more scary(what em i doing i should discourage you not the other way around) still needs work im sure you will get it but make a less menacing title like corrupted paladin way more human ^^
 
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Dang he looks a bit too bright without the much needed shading, when you do stick in some shading it`ll look great I bet.
 
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