SatanicBerzerker_v1.blp

[Moderator]

17:17, 11th Jan 2010
67chrome: It's a start, most of my skins look like this at some time, but usually in the first few minutes I work on them. You need to put at least five times the effort into this skin you already have put into it for it to stand a chance for approval though.

13:04, 19th Mar 2010
67chrome: The arms look good, the blood on the hammer is convincing enough, but the bulk of the skin (the robe) still needs to be worked on a lot more. Shade each crease and highlight each fold, right now it is horribly flat. The feet need shading to.

 

[Jacky The turtle]

need more shading do you know how ?

 

[FrIkY]

Ironically, terrain looks better than the skin. But, if you learn how to add highlights and shading, this sould turn into... rather nice skin. But right now, it's bad... if you want to know how to make skins, study some of the 2D art tutorials that are in my signature.

 

[Jacky The turtle]

Good luck and welcome never seen you before

 

[Panda]

Paladin? although it looks nice at the moment.

 

[AIagremm]

Somehow because of cartoonish colors and lack of shading, he reminds me of Richard.

 

[Dentothor]

There is next to NO shading whatsoever. until you actually bother to do some shading and highlights, this wont be approved.

 

[PsychoNerdial]

Whoa. It's gonna need a hell of a lot more shading and highlights.

 

[Misha]

Excuse me, this is just a paint-up >:/

 

[Scythy Dervish]

ok I'll do the shading now^^

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

ok I'll do the shading now^^

Good. It's much needed.

 

[Fingolfin]

Also, you should give it some texture!
Might sound ironic, but you know.. those arms look smooth as a baby's butt, and i've never seen cloth that smooth either.
Add some grit to the clothes, and some hair or whwatever kind of detail you can come up with for those arms (just not blood and shit). Maybe some folds/cracks in the skin.

 

[X-OMG-X]

I think you need some more details too. And fix the shading as fast as possible.

 

[PsychoNerdial]

Oh, and the blood on the hammer is so damn stereo. Do an upside-down Cross (Or an upside-down pentagram for that matter) or something a bit more creative. Just a tip.

 

[Bernkastel]

I like the idea.. But i think it needs much more details. Also lacking of highlights and shading

 

[-Berz-]

That's so totally not me :/

 

[PsychoNerdial]

Ah right, another thing: The pentagram on the book is supposed to be upside-down (well, if it's supposed to be a satan related pentagram, which is pretty obvious i guess. The pentagram that's currently drawn on the book is a celtic symbol). I know i'm being annoying... >_<

 

[Scythy Dervish]

@ Psycho nerdial: I know I forgot that :S (first it was supposed to be an nordic sage but then I changed it into that what it now should be )

 

[IvoryHellflames]

Hmm.... Unsure.... Model with diff anims, the before said improvements and if an model, the hammer is a little off though if it must be a hammer, recoloring would be adviced... My point of view in that form anyway...

 

[real138]

the clothes are flat. add shading and highlights. make the darker areas darker to add depth and add highlights acording to a light source.

 

[Misha]

have you heard about the word "shading" ?

 

[Mallaboro]

Not very detailed, although the spell animation I though was pretty good.

 

[Don-Para-]

W'sup with his feet? I like this model, but it needs a bit more detail and shades. I say 3/5.

 

[Evillizard]

have you heard of shading?

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I think that the cloth is actually nice, for something without shading, but the feet and hand is bullpoop. I suggest not submitting a skin like this until asking other people about it.

 

[Misha]

Not very detailed, although the spell animation I though was pretty good.

W'sup with his feet? I like this model, but it needs a bit more detail and shades. I say 3/5.

It's a skin. people.

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...what?

 

[Don-Para-]

Uh... event... then condition... then event? What is this i don't even
and you named your trigger the event, good job

 

[Evillizard]

lol, I failed at making a funny.

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

lol, I failed at making a funny.

Trust me, I've failed harder in the past. >_<

 

[Misha]

..and what has been changed? Nothing

take a look at https://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/mr-goblins-tutorial-110127/ for some real input on how to make clothes and stuff.

 

[Scythy Dervish]

isre the same screen? if it is so spam the refresh button (I made changes if you want I can show you the skin before and after shading)

 

[Misha]

isre the same screen? if it is so spam the refresh button (I made changes if you want I can show you the skin before and after shading)

no i can well see the dodgy so-called shading you did. which actually made your skin even worse.

 

[Dentothor]

much more shading bro. and wayy more definition. dont know whats going on with his clothes, but a GUARANTEE that it will not show up in game with that kind of shading.

 

[War_Golum]

so bad =/

 

[Wardragonkai]

Boo(cause im a christian) and also because well it needs more work needs more scary(what em i doing i should discourage you not the other way around) still needs work im sure you will get it but make a less menacing title like corrupted paladin way more human ^^

 

[Elsheen]

Dang he looks a bit too bright without the much needed shading, when you do stick in some shading it`ll look great I bet.